From: South Central (Tamazunchale@web44tv.net)
Date: Mon, 14 Sep 1998 11:42:18 -0700 (PDT)
Subject: Space1999: ExE
THISWEEKWEDISCUSSTHEBETACLOUDFROMMONDAYSEPTEMBER14THROUGH
SUNDAYSEPTEMBER20.THISISANEPISODETHATNEARLY[Hokey love scene
with Tony and Maya]GOESNONSTOPATABREAKNECKANDBREATHLESSPACE!
Whew!
Mateo
From: "Simon Morris" (simes01@global44net.co.uk)
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Mon, 14 Sep 1998 17:48:36 +0100
G'day All
When I first saw this episode (on the 16th December 1976 to be exact) I
remember being knocked out by it.Lots and lots of action,fury and fisticuffs.
Well,I was only 14 years old then.....
Since then of course,my views have changed. Its curious how,with SPACE
1999,episodes that I greatly enjoyed in 1975/6 I am less than impressed with
now,whereas the ones I thought were clinkers than I find a lot more watchable
in 1998. THE BETA CLOUD is one of the former. Only now do I see how tedious it
is.
There is one element of this episode that knocked me out in 1976 and continues
to do so now...and that is Derek Wadsworth's powerhouse score for the episode.
I know that he believes the music was written for SPACE WARP,but I am not so
sure. Most of the score reappears in SPACE WARP(again a generally weak episode
save for the music),and it seems more likely to me that it was originally
written for BETA CLOUD and then reused. Thankfully,most of this score is
included on the Wadsworth promo CD and as an example of pulse-pounding action
music it stands on its own. The main theme for this episode(track 20 on the CD)
remains my favourite piece from Y2 and was easily the most memorable element of
the episode in the years between it first being screened and the day I finally
saw it again on video( some 18 years). If I have any criticism it is that the
piece may have been played just a tiny bit too much in the episode....but its
so good I'll forgive that.
The problem with THE BETA CLOUD is that it is so weak that it *needs* the
music. I actually rate RULES OF LUTON and ALL THAT GLISTERS above this episode
now(there were at least a few appealing character moments in those shows). BETA
CLOUD is just a series of action set-pieces which seen once are spectacular and
entertaining. On repeated viewings it just doesnt stand up as a satisfying
episode. There is little dialogue(even less that isn't crap)with the result
that you can actually review it by fast-forwarding through much of it. In
fact,I did exactly that!
Some of the direction by Robert Lynn is good: I especially like his use of low
angled camera shots,for example people entering and leaving travel tubes,low
angled shots of the monster which catch the ceiling,creating a claustrophobic
atmosphere and enhancing the creatures size,etc. The action is also kept
commendably brisk,which is presumably why its as enjoyable as a rollercoaster
ride the first time you view it....its so fast moving you don't notice the less
satisfying aspects......
The episode demonstrates why its bad to be a security guard on Alpha. One: the
pay is piss-poor(after all,they are non-speaking parts...!) Two: they are
always expendable. Three: they sometimes seem incredibly dumb at the whim of
the writer. In this episode,their "rocket guns" fail to bring this hulking
monster down. So what do they do? Of course!!! They throw themselves heroically
at it,trying to beat it with their bare hands. With predictably tragic
results.(Though you don't actually see them die...its more the comic strip
approach I suppose. Can't be too grisly on a family show.)
Loads of crap dialogue:
Verdeschi "Who are you?"
Cloud "Who were are is too complicated for your comprehension"
Fraser "We've got time. A lot of it."
Cloud "You are in error. You have very little time!"
I liked the idea of Tony ordering all doors to be locked by computer,opened
only on his voice command. It also meant that this was a convenient way of
keeping regulars Tate,Bain and Landau in the Medical Centre and away from the
action.....:-). The only problem for me was that it then became tedious every
time Anholt had to shout "open!" and "close!" every time they were near a
door..... Why not ask the computer to lock all doors and key them only to his
personal commlock?
Its also an episode for gratuitious Maya transformations: giant frog-with
tail(sorry I don't know what else its meant to be..),mouse,and chlorine
breathing creature from the planet Kreno. Comic book stuff again.
One interesting aspect was the use of the anaesthetic drug
'Ionethermyecin'...too powerful for humans according to Helena. What the hell
do they have in on Alpha for then? Do they keep elephants there? No: its just a
poorly-written excuse to have Verdeschi engage in gratuitous close combat with
the monster(presumably he's not as dumb as the security guards),inject him with
this stuff and then say: "Shit! It didn't work!".
There are two tedious and interminable sequences in the episode: firstly where
Sandra Benes is instructing Fraser in how to make an electrical cable barrier.
Its a small point,but I liked the way John Hug points his commlock at the
finished product so that Sandra can see it on the monitor,and then deftly TURN
HIS COMMLOCK UP THE RIGHT WAY to speak to her. As opposed to Verdeschi
who is actually holding his commlock upside down when he is talking to Carter
from outside the Hydroponics Unit. Like I say,its a small point but thats the
sort of thing that annoys the hell out of me... The second bit of tedium is the
sequence where Tony and Maya are suing the Moonbase Lasers to shoot up the
cloud,leading it to divide and subdivide....its as if Freiberger's upping the
running time of the script!
More rubbish dialogue:
Cloud: "Can't we convince you that we don't want to inflict pain?"
Verdeschi: "Yeah I know. You're going to kill us with kindness!"
Cloud: " Sarcasm in your present circumstance is hardly a defence!"
(Well I think its crap anyway. Where is the clever dialogue as seen in Terence
Feely's NEW ADAM NEW EVE?)
Towards the end of the show there is a sudden change of pace as Maya and Tony
admit their love for each other. I'd liked to have seen something like this but
it was totally out of place in this action pot-boiler.In fact,it was positively
cheesy. And it was nice of the monster/cloud to allow them a few seconds to get
this off their chests before charging Fraser's electrical barrier again...
Maya finally realises why they haven't been able to destroy the creature. Major
script/character flaw IMO.
She has this astounding intellect and until the end of the episode she doesn't
realise its a robot? Once that is clear,its easy for her to short-circuit it
and bring the danger(and the episode)to a quick conclusion. Its totally
unsatisfying-- as is the disappearance of the cloud just as the monster hits
the deck.
To be fair,I found the epilogue quite amusing and well acted,especially by
Catherine Schell as a very peeved Maya when Tony tells her he was only kidding
about his love for her. There was a line by Maya that was a laughable attempt
to explain the cloud vanishing: "It just disappeared. Its really eerie.
Something almost kills us,and then just disappears as if it never was..."
Sorry folks. This episode is just ' wind and piss '(as we say in England) and
nothing else. The action
is well staged but ultimately fluffy and lightweight. Somewhere around I have a
copy of the original script for this episode and it doesn't differ much from
that which was screened(I'm not sure what version it is though). I get the
impression Fred Freiberger didn't see the need for much re-writing on his own
scripts :-) As it is,the script is mainly notable for a clear demonstration of
Freiberger's abilities as a technical craftsman rather than any scintillating
ability as a writer of dialogue etc. Personally,in 1998 I much preferred RULES
OF LUTON. I happen to respect Freiberger very much but I reluctantly must say
that neither CLOUD or SPACE WARP were convincing examples of his ability at
writing teleplays. But to end on an upbeat note, I must mention again
Wadsworth's GREAT action theme in this episode,which contributes greatly to the
pace of the story(in fact,it carries it!). Primarily a percussive piece for
brass and drums(drummer Ronnie Verrell is brilliant-he must have been exhausted
after recording this track),I have never heard a more exciting score on SPACE
1999(and on many other tv shows)than this one.
And thats my take on this episode. As I finish I'm looking out of the window
and it looks stormy. Its getting dark and....wait a minute.....there's a
big,swirling..CLOUD. Its pulsating at me......its its.....
AARRGGGGHHH!!!!!!
Simon
From: South Central (Tamazunchale@web44tv.net)
Date: Mon, 14 Sep 1998 11:45:36 -0700 (PDT)
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Can't help but laugh (with sympathy) when Tony throws a gas cylinder at
the "robot" (poor Dave Prowse) which grunts in audible pain because the
cylinder hit it (him) right in the nuts!
Mateo
From: "Atomic Possum" (atomicpossum@toast4tag.net)
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Mon, 14 Sep 1998 17:12:47 -0500
Ever wonder why this thing is called the 'Beta' Cloud??? Why not the
Gamma Cloud or the Omega Cloud or the Theta Cloud? It's all very arbitrary,
and, frankly, that's forms the big problem with the whole episode.
Okay. Alpha's rolling along through space, and comes across this big
ol' cloud. Suddenly, people start falling ill and they send out an eagle to
investigate the cloud, which they lose contact with. Then, once hope is
lost, the Eagle returns, ol' BugEyes pops out, and things start rolling.
The entire plot is set up in the one brief scene where the cloud
outlines it. 'We need your life support system,' and that's basically it.
What we get from then on is a lot of running around.
This scene, which sets up everything the viewer is supposed to find
interest in for the next hour, is abrupt, brief, and very unsatisfying.
---------------
Who are you?
Who we are is too complicated for your comprehension.
Try me.
Time does not permit.
We've got time...a lot of it.
You are in error. You have very little time.
What do you want?
Your life support system.
You mean we just give it to you?
We have sent for it.
We can't exist without it.
Neither can we, so we must take yours.
-------------
See? It's obvious at first viewing that they haven't bothered to work
this out. Right from this scene its obvious what a five-finger exercise
this is, so much so that even the writers (Freddie) don't care what's going
on.
Okay, so everyone runs around for a while while the music tries to make
things sound exciting.
There are actually nice bits with Maya and Tony, believe it or not. I
like some of the two together in the tension of the moment, but I draw the
line with the "I--gulp--love you, Maya" garbage.
And, of course, the big surprise that the creature is a robot is
tremendously schlocky. 'OOOOOooooooh, there's a twist that I wasn't
expecting!'
This one stinks, and it's ALL Freddie's fault, and that's not simply
'Freddie-bashing.' This redolent script is the problem, and since he wrote
and produced it, there is simply no one else to blame. The complete lack of
inspiration (or even a lack of deliberation) to this one is undeniable, and
it plays from beginning to end like a first draft. You can see the thought
processes: "I need a monster, I need action, I need several characters out
of the way. I need it cheap, and fast." That, unfortunately, was the
limits of his criteria--I just would have preferred that he took five
minutes to think about QUALITY.
I said several months ago that this epsiode could have been improved
immeasurably if they had tried to do a little bit more, a bit of ANYTHING.
Given the monster wandering around the base for so long, the lack of people,
the dimmed lighting, the whole thing could have been done as kind of a
haunted house episode--the creature is out there in the dark, lurking, and
you get to do the suspense bit. But no.....no thought went into it, and
that's the reason it is such a glaring turkey on the image of Space:1999.
-----------------
Jon "Mr. Wonderful" Stadter
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From: djlerda@juno4tag.com
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Mon, 14 Sep 1998 20:42:30 EDT
I've wondered about that myself. Why the "Beta" cloud? It makes no
sense whatsoever. Might as well call the thing the "Luton" cloud.
Whoops, used that name already.
> The entire plot is set up in the one brief scene where the cloud
>outlines it. 'We need your life support system,' and that's basically it.
>What we get from then on is a lot of running around.
Absolutely. This is one of the most pitiful episodes of the second
season. Freiberger griped that the Year One episodes were "mild instead
of dynamic, driving, searing." Well, this episode is none of those
things. It is the easiest story in the world for a hack to write. An
alien threat takes over Alpha until it is defeated. Ho hum. And the damn
thing never tells us WHY. "We need your life support system" just
doesn't cut it. It's an artificial menace. And Tony and Maya's scene
doesn't do a damn thing for the episode. At least the scene with Koenig
and Maya in "Luton" was well acted and believable even if the rest of the
episode was junk. This whole episode is just a waste of time from start
to finish. But what do you expect from Freddie who thought that "Star
Trek" was "tits in space?" Once again, the American TV network
background comes through. Freddie doesn't want it good, he wants it
Tuesday. He may as well be ordering sandwiches from a delicatessan for
all he cares. Grade: a complimentary D.
David J Lerda
From: "Atomic Possum" (atomicpossum@toast4tag.net)
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Clod....
Date: Mon, 14 Sep 1998 20:53:12 -0500
Hey kids,
Watchin' that nutty old Beta Cloud episode today, I couldn't help but
think how much more fun the episode might be if we actually knew WHY they
wanted Alpha's life-support system. Therefore, in the hope of boosting your
enjoyment of this nifty episode, why not mull over the following list and
watch the entertainment value soar!
Top Ten Reasons the Beta Cloud Wanted Alpha's Life Support System
10. Makes a dandy coffee table
9. Needed it to air condition the rumpus room
8. Thought it was a 'wife-support' system, and thought it could get out of
paying alimony to the former Mrs. Cloud
7. That's not a cloud, Lister's just eaten too many curries again
6. Never got one for Christmas as a kid
5. Their old one is from G.E.
4. Wants to trade it to Dr. Smith in exchange for those nifty Robinsons
3. Needs it to aerate their fishtank
2. The neighbors got one
and, the number one reason the Beta Cloud wanted Alpha's life-support
system:
1. it ups the re-sale value.
Too bad the critter didn't need bell bottoms or something the Alphans
would be glad to get rid of (Commissioner Simmonds would have been perfect).
Jon "Mr. Wonderful" Stadter
From: South Central (Tamazunchale@web44tv.net)
Date: Mon, 14 Sep 1998 20:46:34 -0700 (PDT)
Subject: Re: Space1999: Maya's slip up
Maya may have chosen not to turn into Tony for let's say "personal
reasons". After all she might be disappointed! Or, when she thinks
about the real Tony, she might find herself with an irresistable urge
to...well you know how the song goes! Talk about Psychon sexuality!
She could be the male during one session and the female during another!!
Mateo
From: David Acheson (dkach@hot44mail.com)
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 06:43:00 EDT
So far I have to agree with all the negative criticism against THE BETA
CLOUD. Like many, I was enthralled by this episode as a kid mainly due
to its high action content and the wonderful action music created by
Derek Wadsworth.
As an adult, I have come to realize that this is all that there is to
this episode. David Lerda was right in stating that it is nothing more
than one of the most simplistic plots in sci-fi: big bug-eyed monster on
the loose. In fact the plot itself doesn't make a whole lot of sense.
Just what is the mystery cloud? Is there another planet or dimension on
the other side? Why would aliens need Alpha's life support system? Some
explanation may have helped the story but Freiberger decided to not
delve into those questions. He probably thought any philosophical stance
or high minded sci-fi concepts may take away from human drama. More
likely, he just didn't know how to write. This episode is proof that
Freiberger is all glitter and not substance.
I agree with Simon too that this episode is less enjoyable than THE
RULES OF LUTON. While LUTON was mainly a dud, it was more boring than
outride simplistic. The chat between Koenig and Maya in LUTON raised the
level of intelligence for a short bit. No such luck in CLOUD. Even the
scene where Tony and Maya finally admit their love for each other was
uninteresting as it should have been a whole lot more.
Most irritating thing about the episode: The cloud itself and that scene
where Tony and Maya kept firing the laser into it. Just what was that
simple diamond-shaped thing that was split apart and kept coming back
together? Please Fred, next time make some sense when you write a
script. Even his next adventure episode, SPACE WARP, didn't sink to this
level.
Only good things to note? Zienia Merton's increased and useful
appearance. She finally gets something important to do - her only time
in year two after her scenes in THE METAMORPH. It was somewhat nice John
Hug as Bill Fraser contributed somewhat but Zienia gets my vote. I did
like the scene where Maya got pissed off at the end with Tony over his
"wild garbage" as he called it. A comical scene that actually worked and
proof positive that Catherine Schell is a good actress. As mentioned
before, Wadsworth's fantastic action score which still holds up well
today and was eventually put to use in better episodes.
Thankfully, guest star Dave Prowse went on to wear the Darth Vader suit
in STAR WARS. I'm sure he wants to forget THE BETA CLOUD creature. We'd
like to!
David Acheson
From: "Petter Ogland" (petter.ogland@dnmi4tag.no)
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 11:09:37 +0000
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
I agree that THE BETA CLOUD is weak, at least to the extent that ALL THAT
GLISTERS comes across as an absolute masterpiece by comparison, but don't
know about RULES OF LUTON really. With RULES OF LUTON I feel like David
Acheson who once said, I believe, that the worst sin of RULES OF LUTON
is that it is boring.
Even if there is very little dialogue in BETA CLOUD and not very
satisfiable on intellectual terms, I think the directon by Lynn is far
better paced than Val Guest's try with RULES OF LUTON, and works far better
as a chase episode.
> Some of the direction by Robert Lynn is good: I especially like his use of low
> angled camera shots,for example people entering and leaving travel tubes,low
> angled shots of the monster which catch the ceiling,creating a claustrophobic
> atmosphere and enhancing the creatures size,etc. The action is also kept
> commendably brisk,which is presumably why its as enjoyable as a rollercoaster
> ride the first time you view it....its so fast moving you don't notice the less
> satisfying aspects......
I think this illustrates the Fred Freiberger philosophy quite well, and
in the hands of director Robert Lynne Freiberger could not have been all
dissatisfied. The episode is enjoyable on the same level as an episode
of SCOOBY DOO, I think. I don't get the impression the Freiberger had
any greater ambitions than that.
> Verdeschi "Who are you?"
> Cloud "Who we are is too complicated for your comprehension"
> Fraser "We've got time. A lot of it."
> Cloud "You are in error. You have very little time!"
Well, hardly Chris Penfold or Johnny Byrne, but, nevertheless, not
particulary worse than THE RULES OF LUTON, I think. Obviously the
psychology of the Cloud is not in question here, the interesting thing
is how the Alphans respond to the threat. Within the context of the
story, the arrogance of the Cloud seems reasonable enough as far as I
can see.
> Its also an episode for gratuitious Maya transformations: giant frog-with
> tail(sorry I don't know what else its meant to be..),mouse,and chlorine
> breathing creature from the planet Kreno. Comic book stuff again.
Yes. Interestingly enough though, it seems to indicate that the most
stupid ideas in otherwise better episodes like AB CHRYSALIS, CATACOMBS
OF THE MOON and BRINGERS OF WONDER were obviously written by Freiberger.
> Cloud: "Can't we convince you that we don't want to inflict pain?"
> Verdeschi: "Yeah I know. You're going to kill us with kindness!"
> Cloud: " Sarcasm in your present circumstance is hardly a defence!"
Freiberger must have watched Ed Wood films in order to get inspiration
for his dialogues. In fact all his three efforts, perhaps RULES OF LUTON
and BETA CLOUD have a very nice PLAN NINE FROM OUTER SPACE feel to them,
I sense.
Watching an episode like this makes it rather apparent to me why there was
such a tremendous participation and response with the RING AROUND THE MOON
discussion last week. Half way through Year Two people are almost crawling
on the tapestry and longing for some of the substance of Year One, I can
well imagine. This is how I feel at least when watching something like
this.
> I happen to respect Freiberger very much but I reluctantly must say
> that neither CLOUD or SPACE WARP were convincing examples of his ability at
> writing teleplays.
Well, yes. I suppose if one is looking for something positive to say about
Freiberger his abilities as a technical craftsman is perhaps the safest
thing to aim for.
Personally I'm not really all that impressed with that aspect either, but,
nevertheless, feel that episode is interesting enough as an example of
Freiberger's work for SPACE:1999 giving some hints about to which lengths
he was willing to go in order to redesign the show for the Saturday morning
crowd.
The most positive aspect of it all is that by seeing how disasterous the
influence of ITC New York and perhaps Freiberger in particular was in the
development of the show, the better side of Year One stands out even more
amazing and original than if we did not have this to compare with.
Petter
From: Petter Ogland (petter.ogland@dnmi4tag.no)
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 13:52:15 +0000
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
David Acheson wrote:
> In fact the plot itself doesn't make a whole lot of sense.
> Just what is the mystery cloud? Is there another planet or dimension on
> the other side? Why would aliens need Alpha's life support system? Some
> explanation may have helped the story but Freiberger decided to not
> delve into those questions. He probably thought any philosophical stance
> or high minded sci-fi concepts may take away from human drama. More
> likely, he just didn't know how to write. This episode is proof that
> Freiberger is all glitter and not substance.
While I almost all the time basically agree with David Acheson, I feel
I differ slightly this time. For me the argument about plots making
"sense" works rather in reverse to the above.
The strong points about the best episodes from both seasons, such as
MATTER OF LIFE AND DEATH, RING AROUND THE MOON, CATACOMBS OF THE MOON and
ALL THAT GLISTERS is seldom a linear plot with every element of the
plot stripped naked.
Quite to the contrary, this is what makes an episode like EARTHBOUND so
totally impotent, I feel. There is no subtlty, just a plot that runs
as safely and nicely as a Vienna railway tram. Charmingly pedestrian,
but hardly much to get all excited about as we are slowly and surely
being carried around for a sight-seeing tour over Alpha.
Nevertheless. Although I don't find the point about plot all that relevant
in THE BETA CLOUD, actually one of the episodes with a very linear plot
that should easily satisfy those who had more difficulty following the
more sophisticated plots of the better episodes of Year One, the cloud
being able to talk and think does not necissarily mean that it should
be viewed as anything more intelligable as the more "natural" phenomena
or at least non-antropocentric phenomena that cause near fatal disaster
in episodes like BLACK SUN, COLLISION COURSE, SPACE BRAIN, SEANCE SPECTRE
and CATACOMBS OF THE MOON.
Freiberger more at home with childrens fair than the more general family
entertainment has a great affinity for introducing human voices to
anything whether humanoid or not, just like small childern do, and if we
believe that what he actually wanted to do with SPACE:1999 was to make
it into Hanna Barbera, introducing talking rocks, trees and clouds seems
only natural.
It does perhaps not mean that the antagonists introduced have feelings or
consiousness, but it evidently make the Alphans behave as if they had,
which is perhaps the whole point. Just like fairy tales and comic-strips
are simplifications of reality in order to have pre-school children
gradually come to terms with reality, Freiberger apparently uses the
same technique for getting in touch with his audience.
> I agree with Simon too that this episode is less enjoyable than THE
> RULES OF LUTON. While LUTON was mainly a dud, it was more boring than
> outride simplistic. The chat between Koenig and Maya in LUTON raised the
> level of intelligence for a short bit. No such luck in CLOUD. Even the
> scene where Tony and Maya finally admit their love for each other was
> uninteresting as it should have been a whole lot more.
I like THE BETA CLOUD better than THE RULES OF LUTON too, which I, just
like David, found more boring than simplistic. For me this also holds for
the dialogue which I find definitely below par in RULES OF LUTON. While
saying that the dialogue in THE BETA CLOUD had anything to do with
intelligence would be an overstatement, I find the implications concerning
what kind of person writing the sort of things that Tony says fascinating.
While the alter ego of Freiberger most probably was in Maya and her
brother in RULES OF LUTON, I feel that he uses Tony as his main protagonist
in this episode. Perhaps the Beta Cloud is a symbol of everything he
felt wrong with Year One, a symbol of unclear, metaphysical, philosophical
incomprehensibilities and the fight between Tony and the Cloud represents
his own fight with the writers and scripts for this new season.
> Most irritating thing about the episode: The cloud itself and that scene
> where Tony and Maya kept firing the laser into it. Just what was that
> simple diamond-shaped thing that was split apart and kept coming back
> together? Please Fred, next time make some sense when you write a
> script. Even his next adventure episode, SPACE WARP, didn't sink to this
> level.
Well, if the fight symbolises a battle of wits I don't think it is all
that bad, the Beta Cloud representing European values of history,
tradition, knowledge, taste etc. while Tony is a representative of
pragmatics and ingenuity.
I think this was rather the highlight of the episode, the focal scene
of the episode. The love scene between Maya and Tony and this shooting
scene are perhaps the two most interesting and fascinating things about
this episode as I see it.
Petter
From: "Petter Ogland" (petter.ogland@dnmi4tag.no)
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 12:59:57 +0000
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
David Lerda wrote:
> Absolutely. This is one of the most pitiful episodes of the second
> season. Freiberger griped that the Year One episodes were "mild instead
> of dynamic, driving, searing."
It certainly makes one wonder. The John Goldsmith comment about Hampstead
versus Ohio, referenced by Simon last week, probably says it all. One
certainly wonders which eight brilliantly philosophical Hampstead episodes
Freiberger had slept through prior to deciding the fate of the series,
probably the first and best episodes I suspect, hand-picked by Johnny Byrne
and Gerry Anderson.
> [THE BETA CLOUD] is the easiest story in the world for a hack to write. An
> alien threat takes over Alpha until it is defeated. Ho hum. And the damn
> thing never tells us WHY. "We need your life support system" just
> doesn't cut it. It's an artificial menace.
Although I agree with THE BETA CLOUD being an example of how bad state
SPACE;1999 was in as of being within the context of Year Two, the Beta
Cloud never explaining why it wants the life support system is really the
thing that worries me the least.
Quite contrary actually, many of the episodes I like the most in Year One,
MATTER OF LIFE AND DEATH, RING AROUND THE MOON, WAR GAMES, BLACK SUN etc.
often neglect to explain every trivial aspect of the plot and hence
become much more intruiging and open to discussion.
In fact I think the dialogue between the Cloud and the Alphans worked
quite well enough. As a comparison we were never explained the reasons
for the seisure of Zoref in FORCE OF LIFE, and, from my point at least, this
is one of the major positive things about that particular episode.
THE BETA COULD, just like RULES OF LUTON and SPACE WARP, seems to be much
more about Alpha than many other episodes. In fact I hold the Woodgrove
episodes, no matter how bad they really are, to be the essence of Year
Two. These three episodes seem to explain fully the Universe of Freiberger
and illustrate every point he ever made about Year One whether it was
Year One lack of dynamic, human relationships, humour or whatever he was
commenting upon.
As John Goldsmith apparently pointed out when being interviewed about his
relationship with Gerry Anderson and Fred Freiberger, the problem wasn't
all that much abouth dynamics, human relationships and humour, it was more
about how different cultures interpret these concepts.
In many European countries, at least in Norway, Sweden and Germany too I
believe, STAR TREK was was not shown until the late seventies as it
was probably considered rubbish and was only presented as a sort of
substitute for SPACE:1999. I remember this quite vividly myself with the
extreme banality of STAR TREK after being exposed to the more sophisticated
SPACE:1999 of Year One.
Year Two was specially designed for the U.S. marked by ITC New York
representative Fred Freiberger and even if it was more successful in
the US than the first year (was it?), it was a failure on the world market,
I believe. I France and Italy, I understand, where there was a very great
following during Year One, which bombed totally with Year Two. In France I
don't thing the Year Two series was showed until the late eighties and in
Italy the second year was only aired once, I believe, while the original
series was being rerun endlessly.
The reason is obvious. Year Two was junk.
But, sometimes even junk can hold something of value, as is so wonderfully
depicted in Tim Burton's ED WOOD (1994). While the Woodgrove trilogy
shows what Year Two SPACE:1999 was like on face value, some times the
individual entries add more than the sum. Certain episodes like CATACOMBS
OF THE MOON, ALL THAT GLISTERS, AB CHRYSALIS, NEW ADAM/NEW EVE and others
sometimes work in spite of the awful context and in some odd cases, as
is very much the incidense with CATACOMBS OF THE MOON and ALL THAT GLISTERS
I feel, the episode works even better because of the context.
ALL THAT GLISTERS stands out as a camp classic, I feel, an episode that
is charming because of the extreme amount of camp deliciously decorated
by Ray Austin as a sort of tribute to the Ed Wood style and by a sort
of H.C. Anderson's "The Emporers New Cloths" touch showing as early on
as in episode four how misguided the whole effort of Year Two had become.
Indeed it is a wonderful episode. Not only does it comment on the Year
Two style, it also manages to purvey a rather well put message about
consumer society and environmentalism in a non-cheek-in-toung manner.
Excellent!
The other classic, CATACOMBS OF THE MOON, manages to shred the coil from
ones eyes in viewing the misguided Anthony Terpiloff of Year One, I think.
While Terpiloff seem totally lost with the framework of Year One, already
writting Year Two type of stories, when we suddenly see his work in
the Year Two context I think it works strikingly well. I'm happy that
Simon and David Acheson also have said that they enjoyed CATACOMBS, and
it is also nice to hear that the senior FANDERSON hold CATACOMBS quite highly.
I wonder what the FANDERSONS think of THE BETA CLOUD. I know that Pierre
Fageolle, the French COSMOS:1999 authority who sometimes compares
SPACE:1999 with fine arts, regards it as absolute rubbish.
> And Tony and Maya's scene
> doesn't do a damn thing for the episode. At least the scene with Koenig
> and Maya in "Luton" was well acted and believable even if the rest of the
> episode was junk.
I remember there was a great debate as to whether Freiberger was drawing
from personal experience or not when he was writing this dialogue
sequence for RULES OF LUTON. Some of us were hoping that we could gain
some insight as to how he was thinking as a writer by analysing this.
Personally I thought the dialogue was deft, just like the dialogue between
Tony and Maya in BETA CLOUD. In fact I find it quite amazing that someone
with such creditials and long experience in the script writing business
can produce such embarrisingly juvenile and immature dialogue as Freiberger
does in his Woodgrove trilogy, but, on the other hand, he may of course
be deliberatly writing in such a style in order to hit home with the
Saturday morning Hanna Barbera crowd that he is apparently trying to appeal
to. Judged from such a criteria it is perhaps not all that bad.
> This whole episode is just a waste of time from start
> to finish. But what do you expect from Freddie who thought that "Star
> Trek" was "tits in space?"
This reference is new to me, I obvsiouly must have missed something here.
While Year Two is obviously modelled on the first three seasons of STAR TREK,
my impression is that Freiberger's work for Hanna Barbera is even more
present in his brain, and this is where he wants to direct SPACE:1999.
The inclusion of Maya is a strong hint of this, I feel, and the cartoon
feel is more apparent than ever in the episodes he wrote himself.
> Once again, the American TV network
> background comes through. Freddie doesn't want it good, he wants it
> Tuesday. He may as well be ordering sandwiches from a delicatessan for
> all he cares.
I like David's summing up, and while it is easy to attack Freiberger for
having bad taste, it gives more insight to interpret his actions in
order to survive as a writer/producer within the American TV network.
From my point of view he also seem very much of a survivor and winner,
having contributed to a great number of projects for TV and the cinema.
I do not doubt, either, that if Freiberger says something is to be
finished on Tuesday then it probably is.
Yes. And a very, very nice man he is too, probably, as Johnny Byrne,
Gerry Anderson and everybodywho seems to have worked with him have a
tendency of saying.
Petter
From: South Central (Tamazunchale@web44tv.net)
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 08:24:15 -0700 (PDT)
Subject: Space1999: Beta Cloud/End of Eternity
This episode offers us a clear comparison between the approach in Y1 and
the approach of Y2. The episodes The Beta Cloud and The End of Eternity
mirror each other somewhat. Both have single invaders rampaging around
the base leaving a path of destruction. In both episodes the majority
of the Alphans are "out of the way". Doors are locked by the officer in
charge.
The general similarities are many. Both involved a threat from space
that they happen upon (asteroid/cloud).
I'm going to reserve my comments for later, except to say one thing. I
don't see anything wrong with using comparisons with Y1 as part of the
analysis and discussion of Y2. Somebody posted a concern about that
recently. (I am NOT being clever; I just don't remember who.) I suppose
Trek fans do the same thing, comparing TNG with TOS, etc. In a show
that is so "schizophrenic" it is inevitable. My thing is always asking
myself, Could I really picture Victor in this episode? OR: Could I
really imagine Barry Gray's music playing over this episode? (Don't get
me wrong, I LOVE Wadsworth's music! Gray's music just set a tone of
seriousness that Wadsworth's is not generally suited for--with notable
exceptions of course.)
Does anyone have any thoughts along these lines? And OT (here meaning
Off-Thread) are there any other Y1/Y2 mirror episodes, episodes that for
the most part are very similar in plot or content?
Mateo
From: Atomic Possum (atomicpossum@toast4tag.net)
Subject: Re: Space1999: Beta Cloud/End of Eternity
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 10:57:57 -0500
Well, there are some slight similarities, it's true, but I think your
comparison bears out what I and a few others have mentioned--the difference
is in the justifications and motivations involved.
Balor is a character that held points of view, had a mission, had
reasons for the things he did, and could put all that into the episode. He
was a threat for what he wanted, for why he wanted it, and because there was
a strong intelligence and cunning behind him. He had to be outsmarted, yet
humored until that could be accomplished.
The whole Beta thang didn't have that. It relied heavily on the
McGuffin, the article that everyone competes for but is actually irrelevant
to the goings-on beyond that. If they had established something interesting
that motivated the creature/cloud, the whole thing would have held together
a bit better.
And Petter, I disagree about FORCE OF LIFE being just as thin as BETA
CLOUD--FORCE OF LIFE was, simply, a mystery, and that formed its value as a
story--an examination of the unknown, something that empasized man's
insignificance and inability to face the powers that exist in the universe.
The mystery in the BETA CLOUD simply left a very two-dimensional conflict
unjustified and hollow....it was an omission, not an enhancement.
A PASSING THOUGHT THAT MIGHT MAKE GOOD FAN FICTION:
Imagine the story from the cloud's point of view.....A machine drifts
through space, built by an ancient race to absorb energy to power itself.
It is so old that it's motivations and purposes have dimmed within its
ancient, mechanical brain. It comes across the errant moon and begins to
absorb energy from it, causing the Alphans to become ill.
Alpha dispatches an Eagle to investigate....As the pilot nears the
cloud, he begins to pale, and draws near death...The cloud intercepts him,
and, as it was created to be benevolent, is programmed to preserve his life.
Logically, it would assume that it needed Alpha's life support system to do
so, and the creature is dispatched to retrieve it. The episode as we know
it ensues....
All in all, I am somewhat intrigued by the possibilities in this, the
idea that the previously two-dimensional threat might in fact be benevolent,
albeit unable to reason any longer, motivated by what partial programming
remains....I think that the addition of something as simple as that could
have made this into a far more appealling story.
Jon "Mr. Wonderful" Stadter
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 12:02:35 -0400
From: Patricia Sokol (SOKOLP@war.wyeth4tag.com)
Subject: Space1999: TBC
An interesting bit of trivia once mentioned by Robert Ruiz on a previous
discussion of THE BETA CLOUD. Apologies to list members who have already
heard this one, or if it got posted whilst I was waiting for another digest
to arrive. I also admit that I don't know the absolute veracity of it, but
considering RR is the source, I'd be willing to bet it's true...
Apparently the end of the script had Tony regarding a picture of Catherine
Schell, and commenting to Maya about her morphing into this person, which she
does. However, in Catherine Schell's contract there is a clause about her
appearing on-screen without make-up. Apparently Barabra Bain insisted this
clause inserted. Now, I don't know this for absolute certain and I am not
going to interpret Ms. Bain's motivation if it is true. However, because of
it, the ending had to be rewritten.
Toodles
Pat.
From: Ariana (ariana@ndirect4tag.co.uk)
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 17:55:55 +0100
Well, now that everyone has sharpened their wits a bit on the ep, I might
as well join in. Actual wits-sharpening will come up later (maybe), but
here are a few general comments.
I'll grant you that it's a comic-book, cheesy, Seventies run-around, but
I still feel no impulse to fast forward or turn it off. The criticisms
levelled at the episode so far are certainly justified -- but I've just
watched the show again, bearing all the criticism in mind... and, well, I
still like it. :) So now, I'll attempt to find out why.
To be honest, I think nostalgia probably plays a great part. As I have
mentioned before, I was very impressed with the episode when I saw it as
a child and I suppose it left a lasting impression that survived seeing
it again as an adolescent and then an adult. Another personal point to
bear in mind is that I have noticed I have quite a high tolerance for
episodes in any series which feature any kind of romance. I guess that
means one kiss is probably enough to pull up the whole episode in my
humble opinion. <g>
More importantly perhaps, I do have to say I like Tony and Maya. I like
Y1 well enough for its scifi content, but none of the characters really
grabbed my attention, so as far as I'm concerned, Freddie's changes were
spot-on. Someone else on the list cheered when Koenig was written out of
"Catacombs", and although I wouldn't go that far, I have to admit the
fact it was Tony and Maya running around, and not Koenig and Russell,
probably helps rather than hinders The Beta Cloud in my esteem.
My affection for Maya again has its roots in my childhood. It is very
rare, even today, to have a strong female character who is not overtly
sexual. Her romantic association with Verdeschi notwithstanding, Maya was
flat as a pancake and didn't go around the station
wearing some slinky alien get-up.
I liked the way Maya saved the day in the Beta Cloud. Yes, the clues were
so obvious even Tony should have put two and two together earlier, but we
have to remember that the characters haven't watched the episode over
several times as we may have. And I for one didn't work it out when I saw
it the first time (and my boyfriend for two). But more on that later. I
just have to add that Catherine Schell is simply a delight to hear and
see -- even when she's being chased by a monster.
I also enjoyed Tony's increased presence in this episode. I do like
characters with a sense of humour (Garak and Quark get my vote over Sisko
any day), and the sort of self-deprecating sarcasm Verdeschi displays
under the pen of a *writer* with a sense of humour is, I think, the main
reason I enjoy his addition to the cast so much (we're talking in general
here, btw). I wouldn't say Tony Anholt has much presence on screen, but
he can certainly act, and he's pretty easy on the eyes, too, if you see
what I mean. (hmm, must get a copy of "Catacombs"...)
Okay, so The Beta Cloud isn't exactly a prime showcase for acting <g>,
but Schell and Anholt still get their moments. I particularly appreciated
their parallel expressions of gradual disappointment as they realise
their cunning plan to shoot the cloud hasn't worked after all. Simon
mentioned the epilogue and I agree that it was well acted, with Tony
alternatively bewildered, bashful and finally delightfully smug, while
Maya goes from childish enthusiasm to perfect peeve at the drop of a
word.
Also, something I hadn't noticed before, and which surprised me upon
viewing the episode again: the tone with which Anholt delivers the "I
love you". Considering the circumstances and the script, he could have
got away with making it a flat statement. But I felt there was actually a
lot of feeling in the tone, like a grudging admission brought about by a
sudden surge of emotion -- perhaps an attempt by Anholt to fit in with
the "man under pressure" idea. (And no, I haven't been taking lessons in
"extrapolation ad nauseam" from a fellow list member :)
(As an aside, Simon said "Maya and Tony admit their love for each
other" -- Tony was the only one doing any admitting here. But then, what
does Maya know about love? Discuss in 500 words or less, deadline
13/09/99.)
While I'm still on the subject of characters and acting, I might add, as
I have mentioned before, that this episode features a bit more action for
Sandra. It turns out she actually has a useful skill besides screaming
and opening hailing frequencies (oops, wrong show). Admittedly, the "Bill
Rigs Up A Barrier" scenes were a tad tedious, as Simon said, but they
fulfil the classic purpose of a build-up before the final confrontation
and on viewing the episode again, they didn't bother me all that much. At
least the barrier served the plot purpose of jolting Maya into
realisation. IOW, Maya *and* Sahn save the say. Left to their own
devices, Tony and Bill would be toast, and Alpha one big ice cube. I
doubt Freiberger had thought about it while writing the episode, but I
like that. <g>
I mention our friend Freiberger, and I might just as well turn my
attention to the actual story at this point. I certainly can't pretend
that it's a stellar plot -- "Hero fights monster" is a theme that reaches
back to Greek mythology and beyond, and as the theme goes, Freddie isn't
going to win any prizes for original execution. And yet: I must have seen
dozens of monster rampages as a child, and this was the one that stuck in
my mind.
I never forgot the haphazard scientific method that went into defeating
the monster: I apply a pretty similar technique to problem solving in my
work.
- First, you notice there's something wrong and you identify the
manifestation of the problem (in this case, an unknown monster -- I'll
spare you the details of what I have to fight :).
- You start off by applying a method that has proved effective against
similar enemies in the past (simply shooting them... um, and pounding
them with your fists?)
- If that doesn't work, you try a sure-fire method of getting rid of
monsters (the vacuum chamber... that's one foul-mouthed monster, btw -- I
wonder how Anholt kept a straight face ;)
- Well, after that, you need to get creative (lethal injections, chlorine
gas, or better still, both at the same time -- btw, Maya's the one who
administers the injection, Simon, if you're interested ;)
- And if you're still not successful, you have to go and attack the root
of the problem and reinstall the software... um, I mean start shooting
the cloud. Anything you try after that is sheer desperation --
fortunately, Schell and Anholt do desperation very well. :)
- Maya's sudden realisation at the end is the sort of forehead slapping
moment that anyone hopes for at a point like this ("what do you mean you
installed a scanner?!?"). It's a logical deduction based on the result of
all the previous tests, but it just needed a spark to trigger it off.
Maybe all Maya needed was a kiss... Tony should bear that in mind.
Did that all make sense? Ah well, at least I'm trying to explain why I
like this episode so much <g>. While we're on the subject of writing, I
must say snappy dialog doesn't seem to be Freiberger's forte, but
considering the nature of the episode, I guess I can forgive that. He
does give Tony a couple of nicely sarky comments, but given that the
cloud is hardly a witty opponent, there's not much in the way of verbal
sparring going on. I did enjoy the "Psychon is my favourite planet" bit
(mostly, as I mentioned, because of Anholt's delivery), and although it's
a classic Reset Button scene, the epilogue is genuinely funny. (Maya
might do well to check out Dave the Irishman, though, to broaden her
options ;)
As far as the visual execution goes, I liked the camera angles too, and
the use of lighting in some scenes (they need to get some proper
emergency lights in that Medical Center, though!). I also found the
billowing cloud effect itself well done -- considering what effects have
been seen elsewhere in the series, that could have been much worse.
Well, I think I've said just about everything I wanted to say, and
probably a lot more than the episode deserves. <g> I'm not pretending for
one moment that this is one of the best episodes from an objective point
of view, but I did want to explain why it's one of ones I enjoy most.
It's a straight-forward romp backed by good acting and good effects, and,
probably more importantly from my pov, it's the only episode to focus
exclusively on Tony and Maya (elsewhere their romance is presented mainly
as a pendant to the Koenig/Russell relationship). It's a pity this was as
much as we got of that relationship (but then, that's where fanfiction
comes in handy ;).
And indeed, why The Beta Cloud? Why not The Big Swirly Thing In Space?
<g>
E.T.
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From: South Central (Tamazunchale@web44tv.net)
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 10:13:56 -0700 (PDT)
Subject: Space1999: Beta Cloud
Thinking about it. I think The Beta Cloud has a lot in common with IT:
THE TERROR FROM BEYOND SPACE (actually a good movie). In that film a
spacecraft lands on Mars and (like Alien, which ripped it off later) a
creature enters the ship. It starts to kill the crew one by one, level
by level (the ship is a tradition rocket-ship with stacked circular
decks) as the crew retreats upward level by level with the creature in
pursuit. They try this and that and the other thing to kill the
monster. I forget how it ends.
My point is this. It worked because the motivation of the creature was
animalistic--food! In ALIEN the motivation was reproduction (and food).
If the robot in The Beta Cloud had been a living deadly creature (sort
of the DRAGON on Alpha, or some other creature) brought back from a
planet on an Eagle brought back on remote control, and the Alphans have
to kill it--THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN INTERESTING!
For my taste they could have then left out all the inane dialogue with
the cloud and the silly diamond in the sky bulls**t.
Mateo
From: South Central (Tamazunchale@web44tv.net)
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 10:42:36 -0700 (PDT)
Subject: Space1999: IT: The Terror from the Beta Cloud
I was just thinking about HOW I would have filmed an "alien monster
loose on Alpha episode". I would have filmed it in darkened corridors
(due to a stray laser ray hitting something during an attack or
something) with neither the viewer nor the Alphans knowing from where
the creature was going to attack next.
Then I realized that is exactly the how The End of Eternity was
filmed--lots of darkened corridors, lots of shadows.
Alpha=becomes=haunted house.
The Beta Cloud was filmed in bright Alpha corridors and the guy in the
rubber suit looked like....a guy in a rubber suit!
Mateo (I think I am overanalyzing the tapioca pudding.)
From: "Simon Morris" (simes01@global44net.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 18:55:33 +0100
Petter wrote of THE BETA CLOUD:
> It certainly makes one wonder. The John Goldsmith comment about Hampstead
> versus Ohio, referenced by Simon last week, probably says it all. One
> certainly wonders which eight brilliantly philosophical Hampstead episodes
> Freiberger had slept through prior to deciding the fate of the series,
> probably the first and best episodes I suspect, hand-picked by Johnny Byrne
> and Gerry Anderson.
Well you hit the nail on the head here Petter. For those who missed the
reference,Goldsmith said that writing of the sort seen on SPACE 1999 was a
result of a need for 'pace'. He said that they love dull philosophical speeches
in Hampstead(London)but they go down poorly in Idaho. As a Y2 fan above Y1,I do
have to agree that there were some fantastic episodes in Y1 that were great on
every level,including pace. I often wonder which 8 episodes Freiberger screened
prior to joining the show and who picked them.
> Quite contrary actually, many of the episodes I like the most in Year One,
> MATTER OF LIFE AND DEATH, RING AROUND THE MOON, WAR GAMES, BLACK SUN etc.
> often neglect to explain every trivial aspect of the plot and hence
> become much more intruiging and open to discussion.
Well yes. Again I'd agree. After all,space is supposed to be a mysterious
place. Alpha was never intended to go into deep space and neither were its
staff. It would be incredible if all the answers *were*provided for us. As
Petter later says,what sort of explanation was provided for the alien force
that takes over Anton Zoref in FORCE OF LIFE. But at least at the end of that
episode there is a thoughtful postscript where they actually point out that
they are in deep space..and there is so much they don't undertstand. (I suppose
the boring philosophical epilogue?). But that's more than we got in the BETA
CLOUD,where any sense of wonder of inquisitiveness abiout the nature of the
'cloud' is just brushed aside....
> In fact I think the dialogue between the Cloud and the Alphans worked
> quite well enough.
Again, I speak not from the usual standpoint of a Freddie basher,but I disagree
here Petter. The dialogue was terrible to my mind....sorry about that Fred,but
facts are facts!
> The reason is obvious. Year Two was junk.
Well,there were some poor episodes in Y2. Buth there were in Y1 as well. I
disagree that Y2 was junk. This is a generalisation. Surely this is a matter of
opinion!
> The other classic, CATACOMBS OF THE MOON, manages to shred the coil from
> ones eyes in viewing the misguided Anthony Terpiloff of Year One, I think.
> While Terpiloff seem totally lost with the framework of Year One, already
> writting Year Two type of stories, when we suddenly see his work in
> the Year Two context I think it works strikingly well.
I don't think CATACOMBS was any classic. I quite enjoyed it,that's about all.
IMHO,Terpiloff was a hell of a lot more at home in Y1 than in Y2. In year 1 he
wrote some great episodes.....
> I wonder what the FANDERSONS think of THE BETA CLOUD. I know that Pierre
> Fageolle, the French COSMOS:1999 authority who sometimes compares
> SPACE:1999 with fine arts, regards it as absolute rubbish.
Perhaps so,but from what you have told us about Fageolle in previous posts,I
would be surprised if he viewed the episode as anything else. But isn't this
the chap who said/hinted that Lew Grade had written an episodes under a
psuedonym or something? So I don't think I shall put more store in what he
thinks! But just to be fair, I have the greatest respect for John Kenneth Muir
and his excellent book "Exploring Space 1999"...yet I don't agree with *his*
assessment of NEW ADAM NEW EVE either! I thought that episode was one of the
top 5 of Y2.....
> I like David's summing up, and while it is easy to attack Freiberger for
> having bad taste, it gives more insight to interpret his actions in
> order to survive as a writer/producer within the American TV network.
That's right. Freiberger has gone on record and said as much. He said that the
term "hack writer" had a stigma attached to it that was undeserved,as it was
tough to keep to a formula-type show and within strictly laid down guidelines.
And he's correct.
Simon
From: "Simon Morris" (simes01@global44net.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 18:23:10 +0100
Jon Stadter wrote:
> Ever wonder why this thing is called the 'Beta' Cloud??? Why not the
> Gamma Cloud or the Omega Cloud or the Theta Cloud? It's all very arbitrary,
> and, frankly, that's forms the big problem with the whole episode.
This is a point I missed in my analysis of the episode,bit its a fair one.
There are one or two irrelevant episode titles in Y2: eg SEANCE SPECTRE and
IMMUNITY SYNDROME. I believe the former was originally titled THE MUTINY and
the later THE FACE OF EDEN. OK,so "The Mutiny" isn't an inspiring title but at
least it describes the episode better than the name finally used. And why not
use "The Face of Eden"? I think that was a great title! Yep,it *is*arbitrary!
> Okay, so everyone runs around for a while while the music tries to make
> things sound exciting.
Well,as I've said,its a series of set-pieces propped up by music. GREAT music!
> There are actually nice bits with Maya and Tony, believe it or not. I
> like some of the two together in the tension of the moment, but I draw the
> line with the "I--gulp--love you, Maya" garbage.
It was a very cheesy moment in the story...and completely out of place within
this particular story. I reckon it was padding to fill out the episodes running
time?
> This one stinks, and it's ALL Freddie's fault, and that's not simply
> 'Freddie-bashing.' This redolent script is the problem, and since he wrote
> and produced it, there is simply no one else to blame.
I've never regarded myself as a Freddie-basher,but IMO he has to take the blame
for this one. Like I said,I thought it was a great episode in 1976....when I
was 14 years old. I can see the other side of the coin now. Says it all
really,doesn't it?
Simon Morris
From: Simon Morris (simes01@global44net.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 19:45:45 +0100
Emma wrote of THE BETA CLOUD:
> More importantly perhaps, I do have to say I like Tony and Maya. I like
> Y1 well enough for its scifi content, but none of the characters really
> grabbed my attention, so as far as I'm concerned, Freddie's changes were
> spot-on. Someone else on the list cheered when Koenig was written out of
> "Catacombs", and although I wouldn't go that far, I have to admit the
> fact it was Tony and Maya running around, and not Koenig and Russell,
> probably helps rather than hinders The Beta Cloud in my esteem.
Well said. I have no complaints regarding Koenig in Y1 (but I think Landau's
high standard of acting helped) but other characters were woefully developed
and written. Helena Russell had no real personality or screen precence. Morrow
did not have much of a character,etc. People did not seem to talk as
"individuals". I got a little bit tired of Verdeschi's brash wise-ass character
but I still thought he was an improvement on Morrow. The introduction of Maya
was a great move. I neither believe she was intended as a STAR TREK rip-off or
as a "Hanna Barbera" character(and IMO that phrase is starting to appear
over-used). Freiberger successfully made something of the characters and that
alone was an improvement over Y1.
> My affection for Maya again has its roots in my childhood. It is very
> rare, even today, to have a strong female character who is not overtly
> sexual. Her romantic association with Verdeschi notwithstanding, Maya was
> flat as a pancake (dons asbestos suit ;) and didn't go around the station
> wearing some slinky alien get-up.
Who was it on the List called her "foxy"?! She was sexy without being overtly
sexual. Also she could project a nice air of innocence. All credit to that
great actress Catherine Schell too: much of it was down to her...
> I liked the way Maya saved the day in the Beta Cloud. Yes, the clues were
> so obvious even Tony should have put two and two together earlier, but we
> have to remember that the characters haven't watched the episode over
> several times as we may have. And I for one didn't work it out when I saw
> it the first time (and my boyfriend for two). But more on that later. I
> just have to add that Catherine Schell is simply a delight to hear and
> see -- even when she's being chased by a monster.
Tony Verdeschi is many things...but a monster? (Oops sorry...not what you
meant). I agree with the latter sentiments but not the former. It really wasn't
well put together as far as I could see.
> Simon mentioned the epilogue and I agree that it was well acted, with Tony
> alternatively bewildered, bashful and finally delightfully smug, while
> Maya goes from childish enthusiasm to perfect peeve at the drop of a
> word.
The epilogue was one of the best bits and probably the best dialogue as it was
CHARACTER DRIVEN. My God, I've *heard* exchanges like that myself. (Well
actually been part of one I suppose...)It didn't sound like phoney dialogue.
And that certainly appears in some Y2 humour!
> Also, something I hadn't noticed before, and which surprised me upon
> viewing the episode again: the tone with which Anholt delivers the "I
> love you". Considering the circumstances and the script, he could have
> got away with making it a flat statement. But I felt there was actually a
> lot of feeling in the tone,
Well,he delivers it with conviction because he really MEANS it. I still think
it was cheesy because I don't think it was right in this particular script. I
wouldn't have been surprised if Anholt had winked at the camera.
Unintentionally cheesy...
> (As an aside, Simon said "Maya and Tony admit their love for each
> other" -- Tony was the only one doing any admitting here. But then, what
> does Maya know about love? Discuss in 500 words or less, deadline
> 13/09/99.)
Good point. Then again Maya didn't exactly give him the brush off,did she?
Something about "we don't have time to play with words..". Cheesy dialogue
again though. Actually Emma,your suggestion as to discussing what Maya knows
about love has a lot of merit. Any thoughts any one?
> Rigs Up A Barrier" scenes were a tad tedious, as Simon said, but they
> fulfil the classic purpose of a build-up before the final confrontation
> and on viewing the episode again, they didn't bother me all that much.
I liked the addition of John Hug/Bill Fraser to Y2 and would have liked to see
more development here. And yes we do see Sandra soing something other than
passing out or screaming. But I still maintain that the Rigging The Barrier
sequence was not to build tension but more to pad the episode out. And in any
case,what did all that work achieve? Didn't stop the monster did it?
> I mention our friend Freiberger, and I might just as well turn my
> attention to the actual story at this point. I certainly can't pretend
> that it's a stellar plot -- "Hero fights monster" is a theme that reaches
> back to Greek mythology and beyond, and as the theme goes, Freddie isn't
> going to win any prizes for original execution. And yet: I must have seen
> dozens of monster rampages as a child, and this was the one that stuck in
> my mind.
And in my mind too. As a 14 year old anyway! (And I'm not being facetious here)
I'm just making the point that as we get older we change and our tastes change
too. Sometimes for better and sometimes for poorer.
> - First, you notice there's something wrong and you identify the
> manifestation of the problem (in this case, an unknown monster -- I'll
> spare you the details of what I have to fight :).
Sounds intriguing!
> - Well, after that, you need to get creative (lethal injections, chlorine
> gas, or better still, both at the same time -- btw, Maya's the one who
> administers the injection, Simon, if you're interested ;)
Yeah sorry. When I wrote my review I was in a hurry and never made this
explicit.
> - Maya's sudden realisation at the end is the sort of forehead slapping
> moment that anyone hopes for at a point like this ("what do you mean you
> installed a scanner?!?"). It's a logical deduction based on the result of
> all the previous tests, but it just needed a spark to trigger it off.
> Maybe all Maya needed was a kiss... Tony should bear that in mind.
Hhmm...maybe we all should bear it in mind :-)
> Did that all make sense? Ah well, at least I'm trying to explain why I
> like this episode so much [....]
Yes it did. You remind me of why I liked it 22 years ago (apart from wild
mindless action). Its just that I can't summon the same enthusiasm now for it.
Which is odd when I consider that I still enjoy RULES OF LUTON!
> Well, I think I've said just about everything I wanted to say, and
> probably a lot more than the episode deserves. [....]
No. I get sick and tired of people who slag off Y2 in general and Freiberger in
particular. Your comments are very thoughtful. As I've always said,SPACE 1999
was primarily an enertainment show,not Shakespeare. THE BETA CLOUD and SPACE
WARP are not Y2 at its best though to me. But even so I still watch them more
than *certain* Y1 episodes that I could mention.....:-)
Simon
From: Ed Eckhardt (eckhardthome@web44tv.net)
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 15:25:58 -0400 (EDT)
Subject: Space1999: Hello! / Maya knowing love...
First off, I just joined the group today and starting recieving letters.
First letter I got asked for opinions about if Maya was capable of even
knowing what love is. I definitely believe so. She had a mother and
father! On the subject of her father she "loved" him so much, she
stayed with him on Psychon when everyone else fled (her brother
included) and destruction of the planet was immient. Refer to episodes
"The Metamorph" and "The Rules of Luton" for more info.
Just a thought...
Ed
P.S. Boy, this is fun! It's great to have people to talk about this
show with again!
From: Atomic Possum (atomicpossum@toast4tag.net)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 1998 14:38:27 -0500
>My affection for Maya again has its roots in my childhood. It is very
>rare, even today, to have a strong female character who is not overtly
>sexual. Her romantic association with Verdeschi notwithstanding, Maya was
>flat as a pancake and didn't go around the station
>wearing some slinky alien get-up.
I think the major charm of Maya, what is responsible for the likability
of the character with so many people, even those who say they don't like
Maya in concept, is her somewhat superior aspect, her quality of being
superior without arrogance. She seems somehow far above the Alphans in
intelligence and grace, yet seems warmly natural and likeable. Whether this
is due to the character herself or Catherine Schell ( I suspect the latter),
it does seem to come across.
As for overtly sexual, does it bother you that while not a
large-breasted bimbo, her character still needs to be justified with
romantic interest? That she can't stand on her own without also being
Tony's girlfriend? This is a fairly common problem with television,
particularly traditionally 'male' genres such as action or science-fiction.
(Personally, I take more of the view that she likes Tony much like she
might like a puppy, but that he really isn't on enough of her level for her
to actually be 'in love' with him. Or maybe I'm jealous. :-) )
Jon "Mr. Wonderful" Stadter
From: "Petter Ogland" (petter.ogland@dnmi4tag.no)
Date: Wed, 16 Sep 1998 11:43:17 +0000
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
I liked the epilogue in FORCE OF LIFE, but more than just emphasising that
there are many things they don't understand as they are in deep space,
Victor's comment about the birth of a star or a metamorphosis of some
kind is the thing I remember the best about this sequence, and, in fact,
the evolutionary aspect of life, evolution perhaps being the force of life,
was the point I felt as an essence of the Johnny Byrne script.
In THE BETA COULD the cloud does not seem to have any metaphorical aspect
to it, except, as I suggested earlier, it perhaps works as Freiberger's
symbol of the writer, either himselft, but perhaps more likely the foggy
British writers he didn't understand all that much, who control the
characters of the play.
Tony and Maya shooting at the cloud would then read as Freiberger fighting
a culture of writers and customs he finds totally bizarre and hopeless.
At least in this context I think the scene works well, and reads perhaps
as the best personal insight on Freiberger since his assumed discussion of
childhood memories in THE RULES OF LUTON.
RULES OF LUTON and BETA COULD does not seem to discuss ideas in the
same manner as Johnny Byrne or Chris Penfold's episodes, so I believe we
have to be a little more daring in our interpretations on the Woodgrove
episodes. If they ideed say anything except "use every pragmatical mean
for survival at all cost" the key must be in understanding the life and
thoughts of Fred Freiberger, a man who obviously lived successfully by
this philosophy as a writer and producer for the American TV network.
> Again, I speak not from the usual standpoint of a Freddie basher,but I disagree
> here Petter. The dialogue was terrible to my mind....sorry about that Fred,but
> facts are facts!
Freiberger uses his dialogue sequences sparingly, and there is little in
the dialogue that give more insight that the actual running-around does, I
think. Nevertheless, I do in fact enjoy the dialogue as it opens up for
more indirect interpretations of his "survival at all cost" philosophy.
Even if one feels that Year One got worse and worse as ITC New York meddled
and the series sunk to new levels with Year Two, it is difficult not to
admire Freiberger for his persuading manners. As Ronald Reagan said,
you can't argue with success.
A man, such as Freiberger, who lives by a motto of "survival at all
costs" is perhaps not the first one to give up, no matter if his ideas
and taste is bunk.
> Well,there were some poor episodes in Y2. Buth there were in Y1 as well. I
> disagree that Y2 was junk. This is a generalisation. Surely this is a matter
> of opinion!
A matter of opinion, yes. And even if I fancy Y1 over Y2, there are instances
in Y2 where one catches glimpses of the good things from the previous year.
I understand you didn't like AB CHRYSALIS all that much, Simon, but this was
one of the episodes I felt had some more substance to it, an episode that
could easily have been presented in the Year One format with Victor speaking
Maya's lines. The same could be said about NEW ADAM/NEW EVE, another
interesting episode.
I also like the Rainer Werner Fassbinder style of SEEDS OF DESTRUCTION,
complete with the typical Fassbinder mirror photography and play on
domination and subjection.
> I don't think CATACOMBS was any classic. I quite enjoyed it,that's about all.
> IMHO,Terpiloff was a hell of a lot more at home in Y1 than in Y2. In year 1
> he wrote some great episodes.....
To me Terpiloff seemed like the odd man off in Year One, writing very
inconsistently with the rest of the group, resulting in some of the
least watchable episodes of the season. Seeing Terpiloff's work in the
context of Year Two is a very different experience though, feeling that
this was exactly the right kind of format for him, and had his Year One
episodes been delayed for Year Two they would have become much more
congruent and fitting with the series.
As there are some who, surprisingly, put episodes like THE INFERNAL MACHINE
and DEATH'S OTHER DOMINION on top of their Year One ranking, I must add
that we are speaking personal opinions here. Nevertheless, as with RING
AROUND THE MOON and other "controversial" issues, I don't think I'm alone
in this case either. Quite to the contrary perhaps I may be closer to
the opinion of the silent majority. At least Pierre Fageolle, in his
excellent book on COSMOS 1999, explains similar views, holding THE INFERNAL
MACHINE as one of the most boring episodes ever.
> Perhaps so,but from what you have told us about Fageolle in previous posts,I
> would be surprised if he viewed the episode as anything else. But isn't this
> the chap who said/hinted that Lew Grade had written an episodes under a
> psuedonym or something? So I don't think I shall put more store in what he
> thinks!
We all make mistakes. Apparently Fageolle was no more aware of Lew Schwarz
being a prolific writer of BBC comedy than I was. It was a bit sad actually,
as THE MARK OF ARCHANON, a rather weak entry in my opinion, could perhaps
have made some more sense if it turned out to have been written by Lew
Grade. This was, however, not the case.
> But just to be fair, I have the greatest respect for John Kenneth Muir
> and his excellent book "Exploring Space 1999"...yet I don't agree with *his*
> assessment of NEW ADAM NEW EVE either! I thought that episode was one of the
> top 5 of Y2.....
Muir seems like a nice chap, but his opinions are generally quite the
opposite of mine. He seems to have an obsession with defending SPACE:1999
off against STAR TREK from what I can see, and most of his episode analysis
seldom dig deeper than pointing out nits and surface problems with the plots.
In my opinion the type of analysis presented by Muir is somewhat slightly
below the average on this list. That is perhaps not much disapproving
of Muir, as the level on this list is quite good really, at least according
to my taste, but it seems to me he has spent to much time discussing with
trekkers instead of SPACE:1999 enthusiasts.
> That's right. Freiberger has gone on record and said as much. He said that the
> term "hack writer" had a stigma attached to it that was undeserved,as it was
> tough to keep to a formula-type show and within strictly laid down guidelines.
> And he's correct.
Yes. I admire him for his commitment to the work, although I think his
influence on SPACE:1999 totally spoiled the show.
Petter
From: Petter Ogland (petter.ogland@dnmi4tag.no)
Date: Wed, 16 Sep 1998 12:13:42 +0000
Subject: Re: Space1999: Beta Cloud/End of Eternity
> Balor is a character that held points of view, had a mission, had
> reasons for the things he did, and could put all that into the episode. He
> was a threat for what he wanted, for why he wanted it, and because there was
> a strong intelligence and cunning behind him. He had to be outsmarted, yet
> humored until that could be accomplished.
Yet it is interesting to note Johnny Byrne's feelings for END OF ETERNIY
as of being one of the weaker episodes as he feels motivation in the
case of Balor is not clear enough, well Byrne stated this in some interview
at least.
Personally I find END OF ETERNITY a very good episode, at least the first
three acts. The beginning of act IV where John Koenig asks "how does
one stop a murder who cannot be killed" is not very inspired, I think,
it suddenly reduces the episode from high level psychologcal drama to BETA
CLOUD type run-around.
On the other hand, RICHARD III wasn't all that much explained neither in
Shakespeare's early play, and yet it is one of the bards most popular ones.
To me END OF ETERNITY works much like RICHARD III, Balor manipulating his
way through Alpha in order to gain power, and is as such a very sinister
and interesting episode, masterfully executed by Peter Bowles and Ray
Austin, both in top form.
The enemy in THE BETA CLOUD is a non-entity, I feel. There is not very
much information and not do we care very much for either the cloud nor
the robot except as threats against life on Alpha.
It is an interesting thing to compare Woodgrove and Byrne, and I agree
there are common features in the stories, indeed there are common features
in many of the Byrne and Woodgrove stories, Freiberger's obsession with
survival compares nicely with Byrne's thoughts about environment and
society I think.
As mentioned before, I think FORCE OF LIFE is an episode that has more
common points with THE BETA CLOUD, at least in the psychological points
that Jon drives at, even though the external threat on Alpha and the
indestruable enemy in END OF ETERNITY also share common themes.
Jon wrote:
> And Petter, I disagree about FORCE OF LIFE being just as thin as BETA
> CLOUD--FORCE OF LIFE was, simply, a mystery, and that formed its value as a
> story--an examination of the unknown, something that empasized man's
> insignificance and inability to face the powers that exist in the universe.
> The mystery in the BETA CLOUD simply left a very two-dimensional conflict
> unjustified and hollow....it was an omission, not an enhancement.
Rather than saying that FORCE OF LIFE was as bad as BETA COULD, I was
thinking more in lines of if one looked upon BETA CLOUD more like FORCE OF
LIFE, which is a very good episode in my opinion, it will perhaps make
more sense.
David Lerda and other have been critizising BETA CLOUD for not having
the motivation of the Cloud better developed. Personally I disagree with
that, feeling that with an episode like FORCE OF LIFE it is obvious that
there is no need for any further explanation of the space phenomenon in
order to make a good episode.
The weak points about THE BETA CLOUD is, on the other hand I feel, that
it's "survival of the fittest" theme, not unlike the evolution theme of
FORCE OF LIFE perhaps, is not being developed beneath the very superficial.
Even if philosophy of Freiberger is efficient, it is extremely simplistic
and we never get more insight after a few minutes of running around the
fighting. We should perhaps be happy that he never wrote more than
three episodes for the series, as they would look tediously the same I
suppose, although there are minor differences between RULES OF LUTON,
BETA CLOUD and SPACE WARP.
Personally I like THE BETA CLOUD the best of the three, but we still
haven analysed SPACE WARP properly yet, so there may be some insights to
the universe of Freiberger yet unknown.
Petter
From: Ariana (ariana@ndirect4tag.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Wed, 16 Sep 1998 15:24:40 +0100
Hello Simon
Glad to know someone waded through my ramblings -- I was sick at home with a
cold, so I thought I might as well explain *exactly* what I liked about the
ep, in as much detail as I could muster!
>Well said. I have no complaints regarding Koenig in Y1 (but I think Landau's
>high standard of acting helped) but other characters were woefully developed
>and written. Helena Russell had no real personality or screen precence.
No one in Y1 really caught my attention. I paid attention to Koenig and
Russell, not only because of the romantic association, but also because of
the quality of Landau's acting (and Bain's, when she got a chance). I was
glad they brought Alan back in Y2 (there just aren't that many Australians
in Space!), Paul was okay, for all he got to do, I didn't like Victor (eek,
heresy on this list, but what can I say?) and all the other secondary
characters struck me as so many bits of cardboard. Maybe they stuck around a
few centuries and joined the Enterprise D.
>but I still thought he was an improvement on Morrow. The introduction of Maya
>was a great move. I neither believe she was intended as a STAR TREK rip-off or
>as a "Hanna Barbera" character(and IMO that phrase is starting to appear
>over-used).
Well, she could have been intended as both, but the point is that the result
was successful well beyond any such ambitions. The combination of Catherine
Schell (one cannot overestimate that woman's talent! ;) and some sparks of
good writing and directing are what make Maya much more than some
comic-strip imitation.
>Freiberger successfully made something of the characters and that
>alone was an improvement over Y1.
Agreed. I also feel I got to know a lot more about Carolyn Powell, who was
only in one ep, than about Paul Morrow, who was in about 20.
>Tony Verdeschi is many things...but a monster?
ROFL! :D
>The epilogue was one of the best bits and probably the best dialogue as it was
>CHARACTER DRIVEN. My God, I've *heard* exchanges like that myself. (Well
>actually been part of one I suppose...)It didn't sound like phoney dialogue.
>And that certainly appears in some Y2 humour!
It does help that the epilogue was given to two talented actors. I re-read
the script before Brian sent me the episode, and I remember reading the
epilogue and thinking -- "I thought that was a lot funnier than it sounds
here...". Well, of course, it *was* in the actual episode given Schell and
Anholt's tones and mannerisms.
It *is* a bit of a classic reset button situation -- a golden rule of TV
series seems to be Never Let The Regulars Get Too Involved. So if they fall
in love with a non-regular character, the love interest will die/leave/fall
in love with someone else by the end of the episode, and if the love
interest is another regular character, then it all turns out to be a dream,
or they say they didn't really mean it, or they agree they should just stay
friends in order to preserve their working relationship... :)
OTOH, having said that, Space:1999 was one of the very first shows I ever
saw in which the regulars had any kind of durable relationship that
developped in the course of the show. Whatever the details of the Maya/Tony
relationship, it was certainly mentioned as a fait accompli in several
episodes (right from The Exiles onwards), and it is pretty obvious Koenig
and Russell were involved in Y2, if not right back in Y1. That's something I
had to wait a good 20 years -- until Deep Space Nine -- to see in any scifi
show I watched.
Interestingly enough, we don't get any "getting together" episodes in S1999.
If The Beta Cloud is supposed to be Maya and Tony's first kiss (not that I
think it was), then what the fiddle was going on in New Adam, New Eve? Makes
you wonder what's been going on behind the scenes -- anyone know of some
good fanfic about this? <g>
>I liked the addition of John Hug/Bill Fraser to Y2 and would have liked to see
>more development here. And yes we do see Sandra soing something other than
>passing out or screaming. But I still maintain that the Rigging The Barrier
>sequence was not to build tension but more to pad the episode out. And in any
>case,what did all that work achieve? Didn't stop the monster did it?
Rather a red herring like the superduper weapon in TNG's "The Best Of Both
Worlds, part I". Great big build up and the thing just goes >fut<. OTOH, the
barrier in The Beta Cloud did buy Tony those precious seconds to chat up
Maya out of the blue. :)
>> Maybe all Maya needed was a kiss... Tony should bear that in mind.
>
>Hhmm...maybe we all should bear it in mind :-)
Maybe it enhances her Psychon powers... Maybe she has a little of Psyche in
her and can absorb intelligence from those who touch her... Maybe that's why
Tony becomes such a dufus when she's around...
>was primarily an enertainment show,not Shakespeare. THE BETA CLOUD and SPACE
>WARP are not Y2 at its best though to me.
Hey, all my positive comments were about The Beta Cloud -- I never said
Space Warp was a best anything!
Emma
From: Ariana (ariana@ndirect4tag.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: Hello! / Maya knowing love...
Date: Wed, 16 Sep 1998 15:30:43 +0100
>First letter I got asked for opinions about if Maya was capable of even
>knowing what love is. I definitely believe so. She had a mother and
>father! On the subject of her father she "loved" him so much, she
>stayed with him on Psychon when everyone else fled (her brother
>included) and destruction of the planet was immient.
Heh. I think we have a bit of a misunderstanding here. I was refering to
"love" in the context of Maya's relationship with Tony. Of course, she knows
how to give affection, loyalty and other manifestations of love in general.
But what does she know about romantic love?
I only have vague recollections of "All That Glisters", but I do remember
someone mentioning that Maya was rather puzzled by Dave's flirting in that.
And indeed, I don't get the impression she would have had many suitors on
Psychon -- we were apparently invited to believe Maya and Mentor were the
last Psychons on the planet. Under those circumstances, I would think her
knowledge of romantic love (or, well, *sex*) would be purely theoretical.
Opinions?
Emma
From: Ariana (ariana@ndirect4tag.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Wed, 16 Sep 1998 16:27:09 +0100
Jon wrote:
> As for overtly sexual, does it bother you that while not a
>large-breasted bimbo, her character still needs to be justified with
>romantic interest? That she can't stand on her own without also being
>Tony's girlfriend? This is a fairly common problem with television,
>particularly traditionally 'male' genres such as action or science-fiction.
This is an interesting point, but as you mention, it is so common in scifi
shows that I would end up not having much fun if I let it bother me each
time! And quite frankly, as far as sexism goes, the mere fact that *Maya* is
the clever one with the secret weapon is a refreshing change!
As to the love interest angle, I don't agree that Maya is only portrayed as
Tony's love interest in the show. Rather, it seems as though Tony's
character was created purely with a view to making Maya's life on board
interesting. I do not for one minute agree with the view that *any* romantic
involvement automatically weakens a female character, either. Girls like to
have fun too! (little rant born of one too many arguments in Trek fandom ;)
Not, mind you, that Space:1999 is devoid of sexism by any means! In fact,
that's one of the things that made me laugh in The Beta Cloud. The Cloud has
just set up the plot for the episode, there's a monster on the rampage, and
the only Alphans still on their feet are Tony, Maya, Bill and Sahn (okay,
who's the S99 writer with an obsession for four-letter names??). Tony has to
go to the airlock to try and fight the monster -- so who does he take with
him? Bill. Right. He has a woman there who can turn into anything from a
mouse to a 7-foot monster, and he orders her to the Medical Centre. Heh. <g>
> (Personally, I take more of the view that she likes Tony much like she
>might like a puppy, but that he really isn't on enough of her level for her
>to actually be 'in love' with him. Or maybe I'm jealous. :-) )
I think that paradoxically, his streetwise, pretty straightforward
personality is precisely what Maya would find attractive about him. He's
good-looking, he's funny, and he is absolutely crazy about her. What more
could a girl want? ;)
Emma
From: bjscannell@spry44net.com
Date: Wed, 16 Sep 1998 10:29:56 -0500
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Hello Aplhans,
The score by Wadsworth makes the Ep a good one. The acting and dialogue I
think are appropriate considering this action oriented plot. The cloud
doesn't give up the details as they are another MUF, the Alphans are used
to this, maybe this was a deliberate incorporation of Year One thinking.
Wishful thinking on my part.
The Creature sounds like he says "ah F**k, uh" after Tony throws that tank
at the family jewels, too funny. Should have used the Force Dave, or at
least a cup.
This episode shows the Commposts being used as a valuable piece of
equiptment when the Creature is decoyed.
The electrical barrier shots are interesting as they add to the suspense,
I liked how it was set up.
The entire Laser vs. Cloud sequence could have been left on the cutting
room floor but again the music helps out alot. The effect looks like
projected light on the cloud, A model would have been a better choice.
As a kid, I remember my surprise to learn the Creature was a machine and
the finale with the Bee in the head scenes is presented and executed well.
Say what you will on this episode but our 5 year old says
"it was a cool show" .
IMHO,
Barry
From: "Brian Dowling" (hellion@easy44net.co.uk)
Date: Thu, 17 Sep 1998 07:58:45 +0100
Subject: (Fwd) Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Hi folks,
Simon wrote:
> Well said. I have no complaints regarding Koenig in Y1 (but I think
> Landau's high standard of acting helped) but other characters were
> woefully developed and written. Helena Russell had no real personality
> or screen precence. Morrow did not have much of a character,etc. People
> did not seem to talk as "individuals".
That, to me, is why Year 1 gets a lot of flak. Aside from Martin Landau,
Barry Morse and Nick Tate, the rest of the main characters were left
incomplete (IMHO) with just the occasional glimpse of past history, as in
Voyager's Return and a moment of Paul's pre-Alpha history.
> I got a little bit tired of Verdeschi's brash wise-ass character but I
> still thought he was an improvement on Morrow. The introduction of Maya
> was a great move. I neither believe she was intended as a STAR TREK
> rip-off or as a "Hanna Barbera" character(and IMO that phrase is
> starting to appear over-used). Freiberger successfully made something of
> the characters and that alone was an improvement over Y1.
I don't think we saw enough action from Paul, whereas we see plenty
from Tony, and this gave his character a chance to develop. Maya was, for
me, the major improvement on Y1, giving the series a character which was
different from anything they and any sci fi series had encountered before.
Credit to Catherine Schell for making Maya such an intelligent and well
acted character. If a Y2 story was remade today, what's the betting Maya
would end up being played as some blonde bimbo with Tony being "the man"
to sort things out... *Yuck!*
We all know (well, apart from any new folk on the list) Fred Freiberger's
background, and the remit he was working under. As I have watched the Y2
tapes (and I've watched them all in the last two weeks), I have come to
appreciate more the character that is Y2. Yes, it has its ups and downs,
but so does every series. I think Fred stuck to his remit well, even
though it may not be everybody's cup of tea. We can waste our time trying
to psychoanalyse the reasons behind episodes, characters, names or
whatever, or we can constructively discuss the episodes and argue our
opinions. I go for the latter.
Emma wrote:
> Who was it on the List called her "foxy"?! She was sexy without being
> overtly sexual. Also she could project a nice air of innocence. All
> credit to that great actress Catherine Schell too: much of it was down
> to her...
*Brian raises his hand...* Me, miss! Maya is not overtly sexual, but
when you have a weakness for long, dark hair... The difference with
Maya's character was that she was not there for decoration and to scream
or make coffee at the appointed time, unlike your average Doctor Who
companion. In many respects she was similar to Zoe Herriot, played by
Wendy Padbury in the last year of Pat Troughton's tenure as The Doctor -
intelligent, cute, capable of more than just screaming or making coffee,
and often being the one who solves the problem. The main difference was
that Maya didn't do that much screaming - Zoe did.
> > later. I just have to add that Catherine Schell is simply a delight to
> > hear and see -- even when she's being chased by a monster.
Oh yes!!!!!
> The epilogue was one of the best bits and probably the best dialogue as
> it was CHARACTER DRIVEN. My God, I've *heard* exchanges like that
> myself. (Well actually been part of one I suppose...)It didn't sound
> like phoney dialogue. And that certainly appears in some Y2 humour!
Tony does get some good lines now and then, though his "Take a couple of
nuclear physicists with you just in case" to Alan in Bringers Of Wonder
(and there happen to be two there as well!!) has to be a contender for
naffest dialogue in the series.
I recall when I bought the tape and played it at home, I got distracted
for some time. When I came back I saw the creature and said in jest to my
housemates "Egad! 'Tis Dave Prowse in a rubber suit!". I was stunned
when I found out I was right. And one can only imagine the pain Dave felt
as that fire extinguisher found its target... Ouchie! That must have
hurt... :-(
And yes, I did actually say that line.
> I liked the addition of John Hug/Bill Fraser to Y2 and would have liked
> to see more development here. And yes we do see Sandra soing something
> other than passing out or screaming. But I still maintain that the
> Rigging The Barrier sequence was not to build tension but more to pad
> the episode out. And in any case,what did all that work achieve? Didn't
> stop the monster did it?
I liked this episode because we see more of Fraser and Sandra. I believe
that there is a darker side to Sandra which we haven't seen (it's always
the cutesy quiet ones you have to watch... :-), but that's for a different
thread... It shouldn't be the guest stars and main characters who get all
the action, it's helpful to the whole product to see other folk around the
place and getting involved in situations.
> > - First, you notice there's something wrong and you identify the
> > manifestation of the problem (in this case, an unknown monster -- I'll
> > spare you the details of what I have to fight :).
Out! Out! You demons of stupidity! I've got a postcard of this Dogbert
cartoon on my phone, and it occasionally gets pointed to. No doubt Emma
goes through the same... :-)
> > It's a straight-forward romp backed by good acting and good
> > effects, and, probably more importantly from my pov, it's the only
And good music as well - Derek's score here helps the episode go along.
Without it, I'm not sure how bad it could have ended up.
> No. I get sick and tired of people who slag off Y2 in general and
> Freiberger in particular. Your comments are very thoughtful. As I've
> always said,SPACE 1999 was primarily an enertainment show,not
> Shakespeare. THE BETA CLOUD and SPACE WARP are not Y2 at its best though
> to me. But even so I still watch them more than *certain* Y1 episodes
> that I could mention.....:-)
I'll raise my glass of warm milk to that one! Over the course of this
whole exercise, I have found elements and stories in both seasons that I
like, albeit for different reasons. I don't think either of the seasons
can be written off wholesale as total crap, as neither season deserves
that treatment.
Brian Dowling
From: jcg@vh4tag.net
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 1998 23:05:10 -0400
Subject: Space1999: Not so empty?
I find it interesting that some of these "empty, shoot 'em up, meaningless"
year two episodes generate some of the most discussion.
I also wonder if it's no accident that Freddie wrote three scripts that
acted as either half of the double ups, or as a vehicle for the Landau's
vacation? He is hard to go all one way or the other on, because though
these are quick knock offs (I think) he still can put in stuff we like (the
discussion in "Rules"; the tag in "Beta".)
From: jcg@vh4tag.net
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 1998 23:00:36 -0400
Subject: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
What is this core that Alpha doesn't have more then one?
It's silly after awhile that every door explodes when forced open.
Tony Anholt always sounds a little strange when he is doing dialog to a
creature that doesn't know English. "Who...are...you?" Very stillted
rather then slow and precise.
Seeing glimpses of the eagle cockpit behind the creature they just stuck up
some vague looking electronic wall to be the front of the cockpit...and no
windows.
More dubbing in Medical Center. What was wrong with the audio during
filming of this series?
Tony has the creature locked in the vacuum chamber, and he opens the door?
Damn!
Interesting Maya is waiting for permission or a crisis to escape Medical
Center, since she could have changed and gone into the vents anytime.
I like year two Helena when she is out of it (Journey to Where, Beta Cloud)
and she still can spout the medical technical stuff.
Does anybody think Tony's love declaration comes at an odd place, or does
it fit in with the genre?
Once again, the temp would not drop five degrees the second the core is
removed.
I too liked the tag. Humorous yes, but a little more real then ususal, and
I like Tony's laying back with his arm behind his head feeling very satisfied.
In the credits, the creature is billed as "Space/Kreno Animal." Kreno?
What's that mean?
From: jcg@vh4tag.net
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 1998 22:47:46 -0400
Subject: Space1999: Travel tube doors
In The Beta Cloud I saw at least three instances where the travel tubes had
double doors.
[EDITOR'S NOTE: Triggers a thread on Travel Tube Doors
(and some other technology).]
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 02:12:55 -0500
From: David Welle (dwelle@itol4tag.com)
Subject: Space1999: Love, Maya, and Tony
At 05:55 PM 09/15/98 +0100, Ariana wrote:
>(As an aside, Simon said "Maya and Tony admit their love for each
>other" -- Tony was the only one doing any admitting here. But then, what
>does Maya know about love? Discuss in 500 words or less, deadline
>13/09/99.)
Oh yikes. Only 500 words?? ;-) Actually, to be brief...
Someone pointed out the love she had for her family. Not the same thing, I
know, but Mentor seems to have raised his daughter very well, to be a warm,
intelligent, friendly, humorous person, which would certainly be an
attractant to most of the opposite sex anyway.
The apparent lack of young men her age, during the "teenage" years (I mean
the same phase in her life, even if counting by different measures), would
of course be an issue; but maybe that's part of why it took her and Tony so
long to really start connecting on deeper emotional levels.
For once, the "log," with its 342-2409 range, which seems too long for most
things, actually seems to make some sense in this one area. In a sense,
Maya starts out like a child when it comes to love. Tony has a childish
streak mixed with a somewhat macho nature. Maya shows emotion well, but
doesn't put her personal feelings into words that often. Tony almost never
puts his feelings into words, at least when it comes to love.
So in different ways, both have to grow up in these areas, learning to feel
and finally speak deeper romantic love. They keep their basic natures, but
have to learn new things as well.
That's my perception, anyway, and the short version of that. I'd probably
need the 13/09/99 deadline otherwise!
Philippa Sidle, though not on the list now, had very different feelings
about how Tony and Maya's relationship progressed, which you can read in
her fan fiction. We both saw them as having problems communicating their
feelings, and having some immature aspects to them; but since Maya seemed
to have no prior opportunity for romantic relationships while Tony did,
Philippa had Tony taking much more advantage of the naive Maya.
Interesting and (often very) surprising reading.
David Welle
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 02:27:09 -0500
From: David Welle (dwelle@itol4tag.com)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Gosh, it takes me a long time to write these analyses. Back on last
Sunday, though, I was thinking of starting out my "Beta Cloud" statements
with something like... 'For all of its flaws, including questionable plot
points, erratic dialog, and rather straightforward and even simple theme, I
seem to have a soft spot for this episode, even though I'm not entirely
sure why.'
Simon certainly stated a lot of these problems a few days later, many of
which I agree were flaws. Yet I also found myself agreeing with a lot of
what Emma (a.k.a. "Ariana") said in her note.
The episode is what I just said before, and I agree with much of what Simon
stated as well, yet for a "run around the base and try to destroy the
monster" episode, it works remarkably well. It's not not tightly plotted,
the cloud's motivation in wanting the life support unit takes some
suspension of disbelief (or requires a better cover story), yet it is great
fun as a straight-forward action episode. I don't mind straight-forward
entertainment now and then. "The Taybor" was very good as comic relief,
and "The Beta Cloud" was very good, albeit not great, as "pure" action
(whatever that means).
Okay, to the episode itself.
First, there's the title. It still sounds silly and meaninglessly
arbitrary, but my original question has peaked my own curiosity: is it the
second "space cloud" they've encountered? I can only remember "Collision
Course" as having a "cloud" before then, while "Seance Spectre" is yet to
follow. I'd be surprised if this is true, though, and even more surprised
if it was intentional, because Freiberger only saw eight Y1 episodes before
starting Y2. (Maybe he watched more Y1 after that point; but I've never
heard that, and don't see how he'd have the time if they had to rush on Y2
anyway).
The so-named cloud appears, but one declaration is odd: "range constant."
It appears out of thin space (which I can accept in general, considering
how many things do just that in SF), and is even moving along with them,
while looking like it is expanding. Already, it seems somewhat
illusionary, or else their scanners are being affected, which becomes the
case soon enough. It can sort of seem explained, yet sort of seem hokey at
the same time.
People start fainting, as if their systems are being interfered with in a
way not too dissimilar to the computers. The cloud persists for days, and
soon almost everyone has been affected, except for Maya, Tony, Sandra, and
a progressively less number of Alphans, as if some are immune, some only
partially. (The reasons are never clear on any of this.)
An Eagle was sent out to the cloud, but returns with no life signs, while
still seeming to be under perfect control, which leads the commander person
to apparently assume the pilot is on board and the scanners are on the
blink. The pilot is not on board, however, but some creature is.
Various weapons don't stop it, and when some Alphans (foolishly) attack it
themselves, they are only injured or killed. Tony orders Maya and Sandra
to medical center. As a few people pointed out, why didn't Tony have Maya
try an attack as another form? The first several times I saw it, it never
seemed surprising; then when people here pointed it out, I wondered why. I
could see why Maya objected, and I liked her objection, about wanting to be
with Tony. Why, they're in love, whether or not they've admitted it to
each other (or even themselves), and are trying to protect each other!
Maya wants to protect Tony by staying with him, and he wants to protect her
by sending her to a point of (relative) safety.
Also, remember from "The Rules of Luton," where Maya wanted to try
attacking, but John held her back, fearing it could tear her apart. Maybe
this thought was lingering in her mind. Maybe Tony heard about this or
realized she didn't have infinite strength.
Tony voice-locking the doors, although technically a good idea on its own,
does break continuity (and plain old simplicity) in ignoring the Y1 fact of
the commlocks being coded for each person, with individual authorizations,
which could have presumably been altered for this situation. Maybe a
"justification" for this little (but eventually irritating, for how often
Tony had to do this) blunder could be made up, but I don't feel inclined to
try in this case.
I liked Emma's analysis of the "haphazard scientific method" applied. The
various efforts at attempting to destroy the monster seemed very, er...
human. Like starting with the usual methods (shooting it), then seemingly
sure-fire methods (vacuum chamber ought to kill), then getting creative
(lethal injection and chlorine gas), then trying to attack the original
source (cloud).
It took a little bit of thought on my part, regarding the chlorine gas.
After all, a vacuum chamber failed, so why couldn't it live through
poisonous gas. On the other hand, chlorine can "burn" tissue too, as in
"AB Chrysalis," so it was worth a try. Desperation does work in ways like
that: throwing any idea you can at the problem.
Emma, do you work in programming or technical support of computer software
or hardware? You peppered your note with phrases that sound awfully
familiar. I'm a programmer/analyst myself, and, concerned with quality
have to deal with the frustration of bugs that appear in our code, or
filter up from other departments. Sometimes, a solution can seem obvious
yet fail, and sometimes it can be the desperate attempt, which seems stupid
and doomed to uselessness, that often proves the breakthrough.
So on other levels, I can empathize with what the Alphans are going
through. It seems inevitable that such a situation would come sooner or
later. Sure, it's an old type of story, but S19 does a good version of it.
In all of this, Maya has left Medical Center by crawling through a vent
tube, as a mouse. Yes, I wondered why she just didn't become Tony. I
liked someone's (sorry, forgot the orginator's name) idea that she was
uncomfortable doing so. She actually turned into Alphans very rarely, with
Helena and Cranston being the only ones I can think of now, and Tony is a
whole other case besides. So that may not have been the first thing that
came to mind; but rather went ahead in the rush, doing what she so often
did. Sometimes, in desperate situations, people do that, rushing ahead
with the first thing that comes to mind. I'm not sure.
When Maya does come to Tony's rescue, she succeeds in that, but then
becomes in need of rescue herself. This does, curiously enough, point to
some continuity with "Rules of Luton," and is also perhaps just the thing
Tony feared.
Maya also finds herself unable to turn into the creature, which baffles
her, but at first, only for the little time that she has before they once
again have to rush along, distracted by another problem.
Oh, the bit with firing at the cloud. Definitely the most tediously hokey
piece of this episode. This despite the fact I eventually figured the
whole "diamond" thing was just the cloud's way of wasting the Alphans'
time. There was mass in the cloud, but the light show was put on to draw
off Tony and Maya. As such, it worked, but I still don't like that scene,
other than how it showed Maya and Tony working as a team.
Emma pointed out that she liked Tony and Maya, and that this episode
featured them the most. I wish there had been other episodes besides this
one, but this was a good romp, and seeing them in the thick of the action
probably helped make it better, or at least more fun, than it probably
would have been otherwise. Catherine Schell and Tony Anholt had the right
chemistry in this episode, and I'm not talking about just the romantic
scenes, but the whole general tone between them throughout the episode.
But speaking of chemistry, what about the main two romantic scenes? Well,
I liked how the pressure drove both to finally admit, out loud, their
feelings to each other. His line about Psychon being his favorite planet
makes me cringe a little, yet doesn't love sometimes bring out cheesy
sounding lines, especially under pressure? So I actually find myself
giving Tony points for one of the more original "come on" lines around.
:-) It still sounds a bit corny in the "light of day," but Maya obviously
doesn't care, except that he's wasting precious seconds on words. Sounds
so... human -- both of them. It works.
Heck, probably everyone says some things, in the rest of day-to-day life,
that they'd like to take back and reword, for sounding silly the first
time. I certainly do. Along the same lines, people often waffle about
with romantic stuff as well, during and after the fact.
Indeed, Tony takes back what he said, in that he later calls it "wild
garbage." Ouch, poor Maya. These two, as Philippa once pointed out, don't
communicate their emotions very well. I suppose part of it (all of it?) is
Tony trying to act the "macho man" again, slipping back to his sort of smug
self-assuredness, trying to smooth over the "damage" his admission may have
caused, only to find out that she really did seem to feel like that.
Too bad the producers (and I'm including Anderson, Lew Grade, and the rest
of the higher ups, as well as Freiberger) weren't so worried about keeping
the episodes as separate, self-contained units, for the sake of possible
episode shuffling (which did happen). They could have better shown how
this put off Maya for awhile. Actually, though, one could argue it took
awhile to patch things up. I'd be getting ahead of the episodes, though.
In between the two romantic scenes, the creature is finally defeated. The
clues have been piling up until it finally clicks between Tony and Maya.
No life signs, vacuum doesn't kill, chlorine doesn't do a thing, poison is
ineffective, lasers don't hurt it, intense electrical shocks only puts it
off for a few seconds, and Maya can't transform into it.
Sure, the evidence does seem overwhelming, but it's overwhelming at the
end, and I still remember not figuring it out until near the end myself.
Knowing what I know now, I of course can see it all coming on this viewing.
Of course, this points out the episode is most effective the first time
around, but that's true of most episodes, though some seem to get better on
multiple viewings, unwrapping the layers. There aren't really many layers
here, of course, but like I said before, it's a fun episode.
Maya could have gotten herself killed for the second time, this time from
being fried up inside the creature itself, when she transforms into an
insect and disrupts the circuitry inside it. Instead of bugs in the
software, it's bugs on the hardware. :-)
In various stories, I like the incongruity of something small destroying
the massive. Cold virus in "War of the Worlds," for example. This time,
it's a bee that brings down the beast, although not before the latter
inflicts more injury, this time breaking a couple of Tony's bones.
At 05:55 PM 09/15/98 +0100, Ariana wrote:
>More importantly perhaps, I do have to say I like Tony and Maya. I like
>Y1 well enough for its scifi content, but none of the characters really
>grabbed my attention, so as far as I'm concerned, Freddie's changes were
>spot-on. Someone else on the list cheered when Koenig was written out of
>"Catacombs", and although I wouldn't go that far, I have to admit the
>fact it was Tony and Maya running around, and not Koenig and Russell,
>probably helps rather than hinders The Beta Cloud in my esteem.
Absolutely! I agree on all points.
Character concerns is what hurt my opinion of much of Y1, especially
centering around the character of Helena. The themes were almost always
interesting to me, the plots seemed erratic (from the great to the poor),
and the characters were, well, could have been a lot more developed.
Victor was my favorite, John worked well enough, and Alan was likeable.
The rest, I hardly "knew," or had trouble accepting (especially Helena).
FF improved the character situation a lot. Though far from perfect, it was
a vast improvement IMO. Helena was a lot better, for one thing. John was
still good as the stolid but affable, and sometimes furious commander.
Alan continued well as a character. Maya was an absolutely fabulous
addition. Tony worked out very well, especially as a foil for Maya (or is
it the other way around? :-) Five consistently strong characters in Y2,
instead of three relatively strong characters and some weak characters
dragging them down in Y1. I know everyone's got different opinions, but
that's just the way I see it.
Plots improved to some degree. Science (even if "fictional science")
seemed a lot better. Themes admittedly suffered a little; but I find a
great deal of fascination, and plenty of room for analysis, in Y2. The
main thing is that the triple of character, plot, and theme was much more
in "balance." (Hmmm, "A Matter of Balance," maybe? Sorry. :-) I find
poor characters can cripple a plot, and poor plot can cripple characters.
This didn't happen as often in Y2 as it did in Y1, as far as I feel.
The plot in this episode certainly wasn't the greatest, but watching them
run around the base trying to fight the beast and failing at every turn
until the end, was good in its own way. Freiberger's skills as a writer
weren't the greatest. He's far from Shakespeare, and even demonstrates a
remarkable redundancy in choosing "run around" plots.
"Rules of Luton" was one. It had its moments, and one very good scene, but
got to be tedious.
"The Beta Cloud" was another, but I felt this one worked out far better.
Looking ahead just briefly, "Space Warp" was half made up of a "run around"
plot. It lands between "Luton" and "Cloud" in my opinion, perhaps because
of Maya being the monster in that case.
The episodes did have various differences, so the redundancy is only
partial. Like I said in the beginning, I do have something of a soft spot
for "Beta Cloud," and "Space Warp" wasn't bad, but otherwise, I'm not
terribly impressed by Freiberger as a writer. Besides not seeming to have
the best skill for it in S19, there is the double duty problem. I don't
think many producers do well attempting to write. B5's JMS is one of the
exceptions that sticks out most in my mind as being great at both.
Freiberger was better at producing, IMO. I realize some will find it
strange that "better" and "Freiberger" can be mixed in the same sentence,
but for whatever it's worth, I think the majority of his work improved the
series, while some of it did not.
Petter keeps insisting that Freiberger's "Charles Woodgrove" episodes are
the best episodes to study in regard to Freiberger's intent for the series.
I'm not sure about that. Producing and writing are usually two very
different jobs, and skill (or lack thereof) in one does not necessarily
imply skill (or lack thereof) in another. It's like many areas of work.
To simplify, some people are great with theory, but have little ability to
apply it to "real world" problems. Others are have little ability to
theorize, but can take theory and construct something from it. Both groups
of people have their place, but the jobs are different, with only partial
overlap.
Or to take the rather lofty approach of my last sentence, and turn it into
something more concrete.... I may be great with writing (please note that
I say "may" :-), but I doubt I'd ever want to try producing. Okay, I'm not
into writing TV or movie scripts, so it's probably not the best comparison.
The issue with FF, and the partial doubt I have in Petter's statements, is
that while the "Woodgrove" stories do form a sample of Freiberger's
approaches, it's a contaminated sample. What I mean is that we do not know
Freiberger, at least in S19, as a writer, but rather as a producer who took
some time from an already cramped schedule to write (maybe more like "dash
off") a couple of the episodes. We do not know what FF's writing would
have been like in S19 if he had just been dedicated to writing, as the rest
of the series' writers. Maybe it would have been better, or maybe he would
have overcooked things more. Hard to say.
I agree with Petter, though, to the degree that these stories thus become
more "pure" Freiberger, in some senses, but even then, knowing something of
the harsh schedule Y2 was on makes it hard to separate what would have been
the same regardless, and what came down to rushed work.
Most of the cases where I see producers writing episodes are for the
pilots, season premieres, or one of the first few episodes of a season.
These situations to me are much clearer examples of the producer laying out
the direction of the series, especially given that they have had months,
either in first creating the series or during the "summer" hiatus, to craft
those first episodes.
Freiberger had no chance at this, and his episodes were scattered in the
middle of the series, under a hectic schedule. My analsysis skills aren't
sufficient to correlate any real meaning out of this situation as far as
things go. On one hand, I could argue the episodes were Freiberger as he
was, nothing more or nothing less. On the other, I could argue the
episodes were under a rushed schedule, by a producer who tried writing in
the middle of the season, and got left as rather bare bones, without enough
time to better flesh them out.
Still, as far as things went, "The Beta Cloud" turned out well, though not
without problems.
Ironically, I'm glad Freiberger didn't write the first episode of Y2. I
love "The Metamorph" just the way it is. I liked Johnny Bryne's story. I
realize it was rewritten to include Maya, and it sounded like a rather
unpleasant thing to have to do, but it turned out an excellent story as it
happened, at least IMO.
>My affection for Maya again has its roots in my childhood. It is very
>rare, even today, to have a strong female character who is not overtly
>sexual.
I always liked Maya. Intelligent, strong, attractive, able to be both
serious and funny. It's a combination that I find very appealing.
Catherine integrates it all very smoothly in the character, creating a very
rare character indeed. Maya is far from Hanna Barbarish.
>didn't go around the station
>wearing some slinky alien get-up.
No, though she did have a couple slinky outfits that did look nice. She
looked nice in an Alphan uniform too, and point taken. I remember there
being complaints about STNG's Deanna Troi being dressed so differently,
despite being a crew member. Not that I didn't mind seeing Marina Sirtis
in some of these outfits, but I did wonder about it, considering the rest
of the crew, regardless what race or species, had to wear Starfleet
uniforms, IIRC. Besides, Maya obviously tried her best to fit in,
literally and figuratively. (Yikes, I think I just created a multi-pun
sentence. :-)
>I just have to add that Catherine Schell is simply a delight to
>hear and see -- even when she's being chased by a monster.
Most definitely!
>the sort of self-deprecating sarcasm Verdeschi displays
>under the pen of a *writer* with a sense of humour is,
>I think, the main reason I enjoy his addition to the
>cast so much (we're talking in general here, btw).
Talking in general, I do like his sarcastic humor as well. The variety of
characters is interesting, and I like how it tracks as an Alpha shaking
loose some of the shock they felt about Breakaway that seemed to arrest
them for much of Y1. A very human mixture.
>with Tony alternatively bewildered, bashful and finally delightfully smug,
>while Maya goes from childish enthusiasm to perfect peeve at the drop of a
>word.
They seemed to nail the emotional aspects, and Maya (and Catherine,
certainly) is *always* great in that regard.
>Also, something I hadn't noticed before, and which surprised me upon
>viewing the episode again: the tone with which Anholt delivers the "I
>love you". [....] I felt there was actually a
>lot of feeling in the tone, like a grudging admission brought about by a
>sudden surge of emotion -- perhaps an attempt by Anholt to fit in with
>the "man under pressure" idea.
You probably put it better than I earlier in this note.
>(And no, I haven't been taking lessons in
>"extrapolation ad nauseam" from a fellow list member :)
Uh oh, sounds like me! :-)
>While I'm still on the subject of characters and acting, I might add, as
>I have mentioned before, that this episode features a bit more action for
>Sandra. It turns out she actually has a useful skill besides screaming
>and opening hailing frequencies (oops, wrong show). Admittedly, the "Bill
>Rigs Up A Barrier" scenes were a tad tedious,
I agree about Sandra, but actually felt the scenes with Fraser worked too.
I didn't find them tedious, perhaps because they do...
>fulfil the classic purpose of a build-up before the final confrontation
It's fairly transparent in that sense, but what they tried to do in rigging
that barrier did make sense in the episode, with the Alphans in a desperate
"try anything they can" mode, which I found convincing enough.
>and on viewing the episode again, they didn't bother me all that much. At
>least the barrier served the plot purpose of jolting Maya into
>realisation. IOW, Maya *and* Sahn save the say. Left to their own
>devices, Tony and Bill would be toast, and Alpha one big ice cube. I
>doubt Freiberger had thought about it while writing the episode, but I
>like that. <g>
<LOL> Emma's got a devilish turn of phrase. :-)
Loved her MSTie-like take of the episode. Hey, I like parody too!
>I mention our friend Freiberger, and I might just as well turn my
>attention to the actual story at this point. I certainly can't pretend
>that it's a stellar plot -- "Hero fights monster" is a theme that reaches
>back to Greek mythology and beyond, and as the theme goes, Freddie isn't
>going to win any prizes for original execution. And yet: I must have seen
>dozens of monster rampages as a child, and this was the one that stuck in
>my mind.
I agreed on all points. It's old, it's hoary, Freddie doesn't add much new
to it, but he executes it well. Not perfectly, but well enough that it
stuck in my mind too, and is such a good and entertaining action story that
I'd give this one a 3.0/B or so.
David Welle
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 1998 23:35:39 -0500
From: Robert Gilbert (bcpgd@shaw.wave4tag.ca)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
> Tony has the creature locked in the vacuum chamber, and he opens the door?
> Damn!
There is no way to tell if the creature is dead unless he does open it --- and
he'd just hate to have some _Woman_ go in there and be smarter than he is by
opening the V.C. to find the creature? I agree he should've left it in there till
John and the others were better and could decide for themselves what to do with
it, but then Tony (SuperEgo-Extraordinaire) wouldn't have the entire credit of
killing the creature!
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 02:40:39 -0500
From: David Welle (dwelle@itol4tag.com)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
BTW, if I recall correctly, Kreno referred to the planet (moon?) of origin
of a chlorine-breathing creature Maya became in "AB Chrysalis." That one
couldn't even breathe any oxygen at all, immediately starting to suffocate
when she wasn't in a chlorine environment. This one seemed to handle it
better, and was perhaps <speculation mode on> a variant species Maya hadn't
thought of the first time. </speculation mode off>
----David
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 02:52:01 -0500
From: David Welle (dwelle@itol4tag.com)
Subject: Space1999: "Beta Cloud" and Other Title Humor
At 05:55 PM 09/15/98 +0100, Ariana wrote:
>And indeed, why The Beta Cloud? Why not The Big Swirly Thing In Space?
What if one applied Greek to the other Woodgrove episodes, in order?
1) Alpha Rules
2) Beta Cloud
3) Gamma Warp
We do have "Lambda Factor," though not written by Freiberger.
There were the Deltans of Y1.
Maybe "The Last Sunset" should have been named "Sunset Omega."
I've got a "Moonbase Omega" (sort of) in one of my stories.
We could have had "Nu Adam Nu Eve."
Tora (in "The Seance Spectre") could have been Tau.
Kappacombs of the Moon?
How about the "Guardian of Pi" or "Full Two Pi R"
So many epsilons (er... episodes), so little time.
Sorry, I'll go get some sleep now.
My 1.999 cents, minus some sense,
David Welle
From: Ariana (ariana@ndirect4tag.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: Off topic
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 10:51:37 +0100
Hello all
>A lot of you say you do not like the show or say it is silly now because of
>this or that scene.
Fortunately, I think most of our comments are directed at this or that
episode -- we wouldn't all be here if we really thought the whole series was
silly.
>As we matured and our would became larger we learned with experience.
I agree that things change with time, although I'm glad to report I'm one of
those who has kept my childhood enthusiasm for certain episodes like The
Beta Cloud. <g>
>In the scene were Tony lets Maya know he loves her, maybe Maya already loves
>Tony but did not want to say so thinking it may scare off Tony.
That's a very interesting point. Perhaps she is afraid he'd be reluctant to
get so deeply involved with an alien. After all, unlike the humans in Star
Trek, who are used to having it off with Dabo girls and passing aliens of
various species, the Alphans have no experience of interaction with aliens
beyond conflict or, very rarely, temporary cooperation.
Indeed, at the risk of repeating myself: this isn't Star Trek. There is no
reason (as far as I remember) to believe that all aliens are "compatible" as
they are in Trek. In New Adam, New Eve, Maya herself says "We may not even
be compatible" (which implies, btw, that she and Tony haven't found out for
themselves yet ;-). So Maya's apparent reluctance to make any declarations
of her own might stem from the fear that things might go horribly wrong.
Probably more on that in my response to David Welle's mail (if the phone
stays quiet...)
>These are just my opinions and ideas. I hope you do not become upset about
>them.
Well, I'm perfectly happy with them myself. :-)
Emma
From: "Ariana" (ariana@ndirect4tag.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: Love, Maya, and Tony
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 14:12:16 +0100
>Oh yikes. Only 500 words?? ;-) Actually, to be brief...
Hehe. I suppose the criteria could be revised depending on the quality of
the response. :)
>Someone pointed out the love she had for her family. Not the same thing, I
>know, but Mentor seems to have raised his daughter very well, to be a warm,
>intelligent, friendly, humorous person, which would certainly be an
>attractant to most of the opposite sex anyway.
I don't think anyone has any questions about why Tony would be attracted to
Maya. Even I can see why! :-)
>The apparent lack of young men her age, during the "teenage" years (I mean
>the same phase in her life, even if counting by different measures), would
>of course be an issue; but maybe that's part of why it took her and Tony so
>long to really start connecting on deeper emotional levels.
Absolutely. Even assuming she had plenty of theoretical knowledge of
romance, there's no substitute for real interaction (and no, I'm not just
talking about sex). I agree with David's theory that Maya got no chance to
interact with Psychon suitors back home, as it were. It was one of the
things I didn't agree with in Philippa Sidle's "The Transformation", the
idea that Maya had had any opportunity to be courted by a young lad of her
own age and species before coming to Alpha. But more on Philippa later,
since you mention her too.
>For once, the "log," with its 342-2409 range, which seems too long for most
>things, actually seems to make some sense in this one area. In a sense,
>Maya starts out like a child when it comes to love. Tony has a childish
>streak mixed with a somewhat macho nature.
I know there are some Italians on the list, and I don't want to offend them,
but Tony does remind me of quite a few Italians I met when I worked in
Dublin. Let's just say I think Tony's characterisation is sometimes spot on.
<g>
> Maya shows emotion well, but
>doesn't put her personal feelings into words that often. Tony almost never
>puts his feelings into words, at least when it comes to love.
Plus, he might be doing some behind-the-scenes freaking out at the idea of
going out with someone who can turn into any living being...
>So in different ways, both have to grow up in these areas, learning to feel
>and finally speak deeper romantic love. They keep their basic natures, but
>have to learn new things as well.
This is exactly how I perceive the relationship too, and it's one of the
(many!) themes I want to develop in my seemingly interminable crossover. Ah,
spring on Deep Space Nine, when the neutrinos are blooming... and the Moon
is shining outside. ;)
>That's my perception, anyway, and the short version of that. I'd probably
>need the 13/09/99 deadline otherwise!
Here's looking forward to the long version some day!
>Philippa Sidle, though not on the list now, had very different feelings
>about how Tony and Maya's relationship progressed, which you can read in
>her fan fiction.
I've only read the two stories of hers that are on the Cybermuseum, and I
came away with the distinct impression that she does not like Tony one
little bit! :) Which is fair enough -- I know how difficult it is to write
about characters you feel no affinity/sympathy for. I would have been
interested to discuss the point more in depth with her, but the mail I sent
her disappeared into nowhere. I'd certainly be interested to read anything
else she wrote on the subject -- both La Carmencita and The Transformation
seemed to refer to some other work (or maybe it was just a common
backstory). I'm always glad to read about Tony and Maya anyway.
>We both saw them as having problems communicating their
>feelings, and having some immature aspects to them; but since Maya seemed
>to have no prior opportunity for romantic relationships while Tony did,
>Philippa had Tony taking much more advantage of the naive Maya.
That has to be a problem in any situation like this where the level of
experience is so different. It's a tricky point to deal with in a story,
too. I chose in mine to adopt David's pov -- ie: it would take them a lot of
time to get really involved. But ultimately, it's still difficult to make it
so Tony isn't taking advantage of Maya in some way.
Emma
From: South Central (Tamazunchale@web44tv.net)
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 08:13:57 -0700 (PDT)
Subject: Space1999: Space/Kreno Animal reference
Well, at least I can clear up one mystery.
Don't you remember? In Chrysalis A B, Maya had to change into a
chlorine breathing animal in order to rescue Alan. She told Koenig it
was a chlorine breathing "creature" from the planet KRENO. In The Beta
Cloud, Maya tries to lure the creature/robot into the hydroponics unit
after it has been filled with....CHLORINE GAS! So---somebody was paying
attention to continuity---Maya AGAIN changes into the same creature--the
"Space/Kreno Animal". Who ever does the credits was paying attention.
Anyway that's where that comes from.
Mateo
From: "Simon Morris" (simes01@global44net.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 19:21:51 +0100
Dave Welle wrote:
>...yet it is great fun as a straight-forward action episode. I don't mind
straight-forward
> entertainment now and then. "The Taybor" was very good as comic relief,
> and "The Beta Cloud" was very good, albeit not great, as "pure" action
> (whatever that means).
Well I sort of agree with this. My main disappointment was that it never knocks
my head off like it did in 1976. It *is* a good action show..but I wish a
little more thought had gone into it.
> First, there's the title. It still sounds silly and meaninglessly
> arbitrary, but my original question has peaked my own curiosity: is it the
> second "space cloud" they've encountered?
Beats me. No,to be honest I think it was an arbitrary title and surely they
could have come up with something else...
> People start fainting, as if their systems are being interfered with in a
> way not too dissimilar to the computers. The cloud persists for days, and
> soon almost everyone has been affected, except for Maya, Tony, Sandra, and
> a progressively less number of Alphans, as if some are immune, some only
> partially. (The reasons are never clear on any of this.)
Yes,and thats one of the problems. I'm not sure now,but I don't think there is
any specific explanation as to why this "illness" hits Alpha or if its
connected with the cloud. It was just a convenient way of keeping the majority
of the cast of screen for the episode. Makes you wonder if they were over
budget on another show and were trying to make up the shortfall by cutting the
cast on this one!
> I could see why Maya objected, and I liked her objection, about wanting to be
> with Tony. Why, they're in love, whether or not they've admitted it to
> each other (or even themselves), and are trying to protect each other!
> Maya wants to protect Tony by staying with him, and he wants to protect her
> by sending her to a point of (relative) safety.
Now this is true. And realistic as well. Just as I found the dialogue in the
epilogue realistic too. Shows Freiberger in a good light,I'd say....
> Also, remember from "The Rules of Luton," where Maya wanted to try
> attacking, but John held her back, fearing it could tear her apart. Maybe
> this thought was lingering in her mind. Maybe Tony heard about this or
> realized she didn't have infinite strength.
As I understood it,RULES was originally(early draft) to feature Verdeschi and
Maya rather than Koenig and Maya? Again,the fear for Maya's safety would have
been understandable. In fact I find the Alphans general protectiveness towards
Maya in several episodes to be rather touching.
> ...Yes, I wondered why she just didn't become Tony. I
> liked someone's (sorry, forgot the orginator's name) idea that she was
> uncomfortable doing so. She actually turned into Alphans very rarely...
Yeah. Interesting question here. When Maya transformed into an Alphan,would she
have taken on that persons thoughts and personality? Or was it just the
physical appearance and voice?. When she transforms into the 'globs' in
BRINGERS OF WONDER she says they have "minds of genius's and instincts of
vultures" (or something). If I could delve into somebody else's minds,thoughts
and instincts like that,*I'd* be a bit concerned. A metamorph's powers could be
considered both a blessing and a curse really don't you think?
> So I actually find myself
> giving Tony points for one of the more original "come on" lines around.
> :-) It still sounds a bit corny in the "light of day," but Maya obviously
> doesn't care, except that he's wasting precious seconds on words. Sounds
> so... human -- both of them. It works.
Hey...I'm one of the biggest incurable romantics around. But to me it seemed
ludicrous to stop everything for a quick snog while an unstoppable monster is
about to swat the life out of them. (Not to mention that it was damn decent for
the monster to give them these few seconds before launcing itself at Fraser's
electrical barrier :-)
> Heck, probably everyone says some things, in the rest of day-to-day life,
> that they'd like to take back and reword, for sounding silly the first
> time. I certainly do. Along the same lines, people often waffle about
> with romantic stuff as well, during and after the fact.
Well yes indeed(bashful smile.....)
> Too bad the producers (and I'm including Anderson, Lew Grade, and the rest
> of the higher ups, as well as Freiberger) weren't so worried about keeping
> the episodes as separate, self-contained units, for the sake of possible
> episode shuffling (which did happen). They could have better shown how
> this put off Maya for awhile.
I tell you now Dave,that's JUST the sort of thing that would have made Y2 stand
above Y1. It wouldve been lovely to have some continuity between episodes. I
imagine that Maya would have ignored Tony for quite a while(certainly enough
for everyone to notice) and that future scripts would have shown a definite
frostiness between the two. For a while anyway.
Could I just say here how much I agree with Dave Welle(and Emma) that
characters came off a lot better in Y2 than in Y1,especially Helena. I felt all
the characters in Y1 were generally poorly drawn. I never really got to
know,for example,Paul Morrow or Kano. Which is why I wasn't unduly concerned
when they were dumped from Y2. I was more upset by Bergmans departure,but less
so once I understood it was more about money than Barry Morse would have us
believe...:-) I give the credit for Y2 characterisation squarely to
Freiberger(who laid the foundation for the actors performances). And I totally
disagree with those who say Maya was a "token alien",or a Mr Spock ripoff(usual
clever phrases which writers and journalists like to come out with). She was a
well conceived,written,and performed character. A big plus to the series!
Referring to Freiberger's tendency to "runaround plots",Dave said:
> "Rules of Luton" was one. It had its moments, and one very good scene, but
> got to be tedious.
> "The Beta Cloud" was another, but I felt this one worked out far better.
Strange isn't it? I was never keen on BETA CLOUD(or SPACE WARP really). But
generally I really enjoyed RULES OF LUTON from start to finish! I wonder why?
> Freiberger was better at producing, IMO. I realize some will find it
> strange that "better" and "Freiberger" can be mixed in the same sentence,
> but for whatever it's worth, I think the majority of his work improved the
> series, while some of it did not.
Agreed on the above.We've said before that Freiberger had very specific
skills(which were much lauded in Hollywood...even his sworn critic David
Gerrold has admitted them)which were NEEDED to get Y2 in to production and keep
it on course and within budget. Seeing as how ITC effectively reduced the
budget(despite the lying press releases ) I think his skills were well used.
I'd like to have seen Gerry Anderson do the same under those circumstances(or
Sylvia,for that matter).
> Petter keeps insisting that Freiberger's "Charles Woodgrove" episodes are
> the best episodes to study in regard to Freiberger's intent for the series.
> I'm not sure about that.
I am. Freiberger produced the episodes I would say to keep the show on
schedule,to provide exactly what was needed in production terms,etc etc,and to
provide exactly what his format promised. I don't believe Freddie's background
had any influence at all in what he wrote. What you saw was what you
got,basically. He wasn't interested in using his personal background as a way
of exorcising demons or anything.... Remember the Y2 production crunches were
solely as a result of ITC's demands. Nice one ITC...if anyone killed a show it
was them,not Freiberger!
Freiberger might well have done better if he was just a writer rather than
producer of the show. I have seen other stuff that Freiberger wrote(episodes of
STARSKY AND HUTCH for example)and was impressed.
> I agreed on all points. It's old, it's hoary, Freddie doesn't add much new
> to it, but he executes it well. Not perfectly, but well enough that it
> stuck in my mind too, and is such a good and entertaining action story that
> I'd give this one a 3.0/B or so.
Fair enough. I still think its main strong point was Wadsworth's music...but
like I say,a fair point. We all think differently. As a matter of fact, I
actually liked MATTER OF BALANCE quite a lot. Is that the one we're looking at
next?
Simon Morris
From: Simon Morris (simes01@global44net.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: Not so empty?
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 1998 18:16:59 +0100
> I also wonder if it's no accident that Freddie wrote three scripts that
> acted as either half of the double ups, or as a vehicle for the Landau's
> vacation? He is hard to go all one way or the other on, because though
> these are quick knock offs (I think) he still can put in stuff we like (the
> discussion in "Rules"; the tag in "Beta".)
Well said. Freiberger's scripts seemed to me to be written to cater for
specific production problems(absence of cast members,shooting of other episodes
simulataneously or whatever)..or at least were rejigged to cater for them. Must
have been a fairly tough job. And whatever you think about the guy,he did
include a number of appealing characters and character moments which frankly
had been missing in Y1 (IMHO only of course). You only have to look at some of
the comments made as a result of Emma posing a question about the
Verdeschi/Maya relationship. Lets give the guy a break and give credit where
its due.
Simon
From: "Ariana" (ariana@ndirect4tag.co.uk)
Subject: Re: Space1999: The Beta Cloud
Date: Wed, 23 Sep 1998 13:31:06 +0100
Catching up...
>Simon certainly stated a lot of these problems a few days later, many of
>which I agree were flaws. Yet I also found myself agreeing with a lot of
>what Emma (a.k.a. "Ariana") said in her note.
Thanks. <g>
>The so-named cloud appears, but one declaration is odd: "range constant."
I was looking at the script for A Certain Episode That Gets Discussed A Lot
Around Here and found similar declarations concerning the big swirly thing
they meet there, since Sandra says: "Sir. Scanner shows that the object is
not moving. I do not understand. Look at that monitor. It is still getting
closer to us." (yes, more gripping dialog ;)
>themselves, they are only injured or killed. Tony orders Maya and Sandra
>to medical center. As a few people pointed out, why didn't Tony have Maya
>try an attack as another form? ... I
>could see why Maya objected, and I liked her objection, about wanting to be
>with Tony. Why, they're in love, whether or not they've admitted it to
>each other (or even themselves), and are trying to protect each other!
I know I was one of the ones making fun of this particular point, but I
agree wholeheartedly with David's interpretation. Maya wants to stay with
Tony because she feels she can protect him, while Tony wants her to go away
because that's the most effective means he has of protecting her... um,
which is *exactly* what David said.
>Tony voice-locking the doors, although technically a good idea on its own,
>does break continuity (and plain old simplicity) in ignoring the Y1 fact of
Not to mention it makes him sound a bit like Homer Simpson with a new toy --
"door opens, door closes, door opens..."
>I liked Emma's analysis of the "haphazard scientific method" applied. The
>various efforts at attempting to destroy the monster seemed very, er...
>human.
It was definitely one of the reasons the episode stayed in my mind. There
was no instant technobabble solution to the problem.
>Emma, do you work in programming or technical support of computer software
>or hardware? You peppered your note with phrases that sound awfully
>familiar.
Heh. It is pretty obvious I solve problems for a living, though nothing so
interesting as my *own* problems. I do telephone support for Microsoft Word.
<g>
>liked someone's (sorry, forgot the orginator's name) idea that she was
>uncomfortable doing so.
I think the originator was Mateo, and I can see how turning into Tony would
be a bit of a problem for Maya.
>From what I've seen in the series, I assume that when Maya changes into a
creature, she actually *becomes* a member of that species. It was clear in
Space Warp that Maya's internal organs transform along with her, whence
Helena's inability to operate on her in a changed state. This also explains
why, as a Kreno monster, Maya started to suffocate in the oxygen environment
in AB Chrysalis. It also makes sense in this case that Maya can only change
into *living* matter -- perhaps her ability actually revolves around
resequencing her DNA. (BTW, this is a fascinating contrast to Odo on DS9,
who can change into any object because he merely emulates surfaces and
textures)
So if Maya were to turn into Tony, she would actually *be* Tony, inside and
out. And as Mateo said, there are probably a whole lot of things she had
rather not know about Tony (I know that, much as I love him, I wouldn't want
to actually *be* my boyfriend). It might also have occurred to her that Tony
himself might not be too thrilled to know she had become him and now knew
about... well, you can imagine.
Also, and here we potter off into the realm of total speculation, Maya might
find it generally more comfortable to change into female animals. She did
become Captain Michael, and a male Psychon on a couple of occasions, but
that was for the sake of expediency, as a means to an end. Her playful
transformations tend to be female -- she probably got fewer surprises
changing into Helena than she would becoming Tony.
Of course, she didn't exactly have much time to ponder what shape to take in
The Beta Cloud, either. She had already used the mouse before (assuming
Brian The Brain was "before" The Beta Cloud), so it was perhaps simpler to
just change into something she already knew, rather than try her hand at
becoming a fully dressed version of her boyfriend.
And finally, maybe she didn't fancy walking through the whole station
shouting "Open" and "Close" at every door between her and Tony...
>Emma pointed out that she liked Tony and Maya, and that this episode
>featured them the most.
It's a pity it had to be this particular episode, but I guess we have to
take what we were given.
>But speaking of chemistry, what about the main two romantic scenes? Well,
>I liked how the pressure drove both to finally admit, out loud, their
>feelings to each other.
As I've said before, the actual out loud admission was only his, not hers.
I'm not saying that I think for one minute that Maya isn't supposed to love
Tony in the show. I'm just mentioning the fact that she wasn't very
forthcoming, whence my speculation as to what she might expect from a
relationship as opposed to what Tony would expect.
> His line about Psychon being his favorite planet
>makes me cringe a little, yet doesn't love sometimes bring out cheesy
>sounding lines, especially under pressure?
Hehe. My boyfriend certainly has lots of nice things to say about France!
>Indeed, Tony takes back what he said, in that he later calls it "wild
>garbage." Ouch, poor Maya.
Agreed on the "macho man" bit concerning Tony. Now, if I could just get that
Village People song out of my mind... :)
>episode shuffling (which did happen). They could have better shown how
>this put off Maya for awhile. Actually, though, one could argue it took
>awhile to patch things up. I'd be getting ahead of the episodes, though.
I look forward to hearing more about that!
>insect and disrupts the circuitry inside it. Instead of bugs in the
>software, it's bugs on the hardware. :-)
That's where the original "bugs" came from after all -- who would have
thought cleaning out moths from a bunch of vacuum tubes would coin such a
long lasting term?
>Victor was my favorite, John worked well enough, and Alan was likeable.
I hate to say this given how everyone else seems to love him, but Victor
gave me the pip.
>in "balance." (Hmmm, "A Matter of Balance," maybe? Sorry. :-) I find
>poor characters can cripple a plot, and poor plot can cripple characters.
>This didn't happen as often in Y2 as it did in Y1, as far as I feel.
I agree with this, too. I can see we'll have to set up a mutual admiration
society here!
>No, though she did have a couple slinky outfits that did look nice. She
>looked nice in an Alphan uniform too, and point taken.
Talking about Alphan uniforms -- in One Moment Of Humanity, when Maya is
kneeling in front of the forcefield, that's a *lot* of leg we get to see
before she changes into the beetle. I'm glad they more or less retired those
silly skirts in other episodes -- bring back the bell bottoms, says I.
>being complaints about STNG's Deanna Troi being dressed so differently,
>despite being a crew member.
Hehe. As I'm sure some people on this list will have guessed, the ST
character I was thinking about was actually Seven of Nine. Imagine Maya in
*that* kind of suit. (OTOH, just watch "The Return of the Pink Panther" :)
>Loved her MSTie-like take of the episode. Hey, I like parody too!
Thanks! And thanks to everyone else who told me they enjoyed it, too. I
certainly had fun writing it, and especially thinking up Red Dwarf and Monty
Python references to put in there! (did everyone get them, btw? ;)
Enough from me for today (I think)
Emma